Bound by Chains - Comments

This is fabulous! I cannot wait to read more!!

This is fabulous! I cannot wait to read more!!

HERE!
I agree with Tipsy about the first chapter. I did find it very disgusting how they were treated. I want Christian and Angelica to meet up again. please! You'r writing is flawless!

I will read chapter two after dinner :)

Here at last! Sorry for the delay Ma chan!
To be honest, the first chapter disgusted me. Not your writing, of course not, it was fabulous enough to make me feel disgusted that something like this is actually happening in the world. I really do hope Christian is safe and happy. This chapter was really well written. Loved it <3
The second one started off well, and I took an immediate disliking to Havoc (sorry haha I know he's the hero) The mid part was a bit rushed up I think, but it's NaNo after all haha! I'm kind of excited, and I really do want Angelica to kick Havoc... at least once LOL Also, I have a premonition that he's the one who killed her parents. I might be overthinking though.
So, I'm definitely with you Ma chan. Buck up and let's finish up NaNo! It's going to be great, I can tell. Keep it up!

Well you know that I love your writing. There are no exceptions to that. I love this and the style that you are using in the story. I am actually hoping for the best for the main character and Christian. I want something good to happen to them.

Loved it, looking forward to reading more.

Well you know that I love your writing. There are no exceptions to that. I love this and the style that you are using in the story. I am actually hoping for the best for the main character and Christian. I want something good to happen to them.

Holy shit, I honestly felt like I was in the room with her, it felt really real and I'm in love with this story! :D

Keep up the good work, love! ^.^

This is good, really good!

I'm excited for this! :D