Maybe I Just Wanna Be Yours - Comments

  • pogo5176

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    Ahh that phone call had me on edge, I can't wait for their next one. Honestly have been waiting all day for this, and it was worth the wait like always.
    December 2nd, 2014 at 02:23am
  • She Said Poptarts

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    i won’t tell you what i’m going to do with your picture. i’m in bed, too.
    lmfao I laughed when I read this, oh darling... you already told her what you were going to do.

    OMG. MY HEART WAS POUNDING WHEN THE PHONE RANG. anhjladjlad, finally!

    Hahaha, omg, he's adorable. they're both so adorable, I want them together. In Love I laughed at this part: "I could be in the right state really fast. There are these, uh, things called planes. They’re pretty fast.”

    Your Phil needs someone like Nora. Yes So much tension, I can't wait until they see each other.

    Also, you accidentally typed "you're" instead of "your"
    “You’re, uh, picture... Wow.”
    December 2nd, 2014 at 02:03am
  • anogete

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    @ bostongirl33 - Updated for your reading pleasure!
    December 2nd, 2014 at 01:43am
  • bostongirl33

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    Guh! Patiently waiting for an update!!! (Ok, maybe not so patiently). :)

    Loving these two!
    December 1st, 2014 at 09:37pm
  • anogete

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    @ ace merrill. - I love that you're enjoying my rendition of Phil. I couldn't get shy, awkward Phil out of my head so this fic kinda just happened. Lupul and Lucy are not in this fic, but they are definitely still together. Actually, I started a Paul Bissonnette fic months ago and I planned on making them both give an appearance. Alas, I've been struggling with the fic and haven't written more than a couple chapters.

    @ jfong1130 - You've got to wait a few chapters before they get some time with each other in the same room. But I promise a payoff for the long wait. :-)

    @ Thatmom - I'm glad it was worth a second go-thru!

    @ midnightmssuki - Aww, thanks! Phil is so adorkable that I can't stand it either.

    @ MITCHEAE - Thanks!

    @ Sincerely-Angela - I definitely wanted to give Phil his voice. Without it, he's a little bit of a closed book since he isn't an overly talkative, emotional person. Especially in-person in this fic.
    December 1st, 2014 at 12:20pm
  • She Said Poptarts

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    SO MUCH SEXUAL FRUSTRATION! Crazy
    omg. OK, so I said that I was going to comment when I first commented, and I haven't... but now I finally sat at my computer and here I am. XD I've only ever read one Kessel fic, and it's great, as well as this one. And I don't know much about him, but I love your portrayal of Phil. He's so awkward, and shy. It's adorable. I love it. I'm honestly wondering what will happen when they are in front of each other, share a kiss? be completely shy and just.. "hi..." Shifty Embarassed

    I DON'T KNOW, BUT THE STORY IS HALF WAY OVER.
    AND CAN I JUST ASK, if Lupul is going to be mentioned? Is he and Lucy still together? (I know it's just a fic, but I wanna know if they are still together, and how they are.)

    I just wanna give Phil a big hug when he acts all insecure and stuff. Arms
    DON'T WORRY BIG GUY, SHE DIGS YA.
    December 1st, 2014 at 05:27am
  • jfong1130

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    Aw! I love this. I am going to need some face to face interaction soon!!
    December 1st, 2014 at 02:20am
  • Thatmom

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    A lot of racing through the chapter and having to go back and really absorb all the delicious details:)
    November 30th, 2014 at 09:00pm
  • midnightmssuki

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    I am dying on the inside and I can't make words. This was so good. So perfect.
    November 30th, 2014 at 06:36pm
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    cute
    November 30th, 2014 at 05:10pm
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    Such a great story! I really do love their emails back and forth. I like how lately it's been from phils point of view too.
    November 30th, 2014 at 04:17pm
  • anogete

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    @ Jayla1231 - I'm glad you like it so far! I definitely wanted to do something unusual for this one. I really liked the idea of Phil getting to know someone through a computer screen. It seems like he'd make a better impression.

    @ Dallas. - Thank ya!

    @ Thatmom - I think growing the connection between them without physical contact (and for some of the time without even phone calls) was the part I was most worried about. Glad it has come across!

    @ blkngld87 - Thank you!

    @ MITCHEAE - I definitely agree. It's a terrible thing to be overly self conscious.

    @ bostongirl33 - I'll make it all better soon! Promise!

    @ AlohaBonjour1112 - Sorry to say, but you're going to have to wait for a few chapters before they're in the same room together again.

    @ lostandfrustrated - Aww, thanks! I love writing angst almost as much as I love writing sexual tension.

    @ Ekangb - Definitely my fav Incubus album. I have a soft spot for that song because it was relevant to me personally at one point in my life.

    @ xXxFallingFastxXx - More coming soon. I've been trying to update every day.

    @ mstaffa7 - Thanks! I wanted to do something a little different this time around. Glad it's working so far!
    November 30th, 2014 at 03:25pm
  • Jayla1231

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    Ok, so now I will probably lose hours of sleep reading since I stumbled onto your story tonight. I love it so far. The storyline is different and it makes me really appreciate how well developed the characters are. Looking forward to more. I've just gotten back to writing myself....
    November 30th, 2014 at 05:16am
  • Dallas.

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    Loving it!!!
    November 30th, 2014 at 12:44am
  • Thatmom

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    Love that they are laying their hearts bare. Beautiful and intense.
    November 29th, 2014 at 10:26pm
  • blkngld87

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    I love this!
    November 29th, 2014 at 09:22pm
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    Feeling inadequate about yourself and what you have to offer someone else sucks. It's more than shyness and lack of confidence. Mentally you are just beating yourself down.
    November 29th, 2014 at 09:11pm
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    Feeling inadequate about yourself and what you have to offer someone else sucks. It's more than shyness and lack of confidence. Mentally you are just beating yourself down.
    November 29th, 2014 at 09:11pm
  • bostongirl33

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    Don't worry, Nora. I cried a little too...
    November 29th, 2014 at 07:35pm
  • AlohaBonjour1112

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    DAMMIT WHEN WILL IT HAPPEN WE'RE ALL WAITING FOR IT
    November 29th, 2014 at 06:54pm