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chapter 8

I love Amanda. Everyone needs an Amanda in their lives. She's smart, she's kind and she just gives everyone that kick in the butt when they're being stupid.

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He might as well buy a pack of purple gel pens and start doodling 'Mr. Louis Styles' in a Lisa Frank notebook.

I'm imagining this is Louis.

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"On the bright side," Lottie says, "if it is awful, at least you'll know you were right."

YOU SAY IT, SISTAH!

Harry knows Louis so much it hurts my heart and I just want them to stop being stupid and just be together already oh my god! Lina is not a very patient woman and she has very low tolerance for people that can't communicate well and she's wondering why Louis is being so insecure since he doesn't need to feel that way because he's beautiful and it's obviously obvious that Harry cares oh my god! LISTEN TO ME, LOUEHH!!!

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"I know it's hardly been a day, but. Is it stupid to say that I miss you?"

Excuse me for a moment while I go die with feels now.

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"It tends to have that effect when you're there with the most amazingly talented and kind person you've ever met," sighs Harry, wistfully.

Excuse me again.







Harry loves Louis. Louis loves Harry so what's the problem, dudes! Okay, okay. I get it. Neither of you know of each other's feeling so you're scared of ruining friendship and all that stuff, yeah? But then, TAKE THE RISK DAMN IT!! And even if you end up hurting, at least you try, you know.



YEAH, PREACH IT, OLAF!

HAH! Harry's praising Louis so bad in the interview. It's just so cute. He can't stop talking about Lou now, can he.

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"... It was just to easy to fall in love with him, you know?..."

Of course it's easy for you to fall in love with him. Because you're already in love with him.



OH MY GOD! LOUIS!



I can't believe how you still can't see harry's feelings for you oh my god! that boy practically's wearing his heart on his sleeve (literally... ) good god!!! listen to amanda, will you? listen to her. and listen to lina. lina is telling you... harry loves you and wants to have your babies and whatever and you better listen and believe it!

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"But Harry's like that with everyone," Louis argues. "He gushes about everyone."

Louis!





Stop trying to deflect the truth by making excuses. louis baby you know lina loves you so much but sometimes she feels like jumping into the story and smack some senses into your head. dang!

You make lina feels so much it hurts.



Oh my! Gotta love zayn and liam.

And Harry's all like...




Why can't Louis and Harry see that they're so obviously in love with each other since while it's so very obvious to the point that everyone can see it. urgh! you boys need to open your eyes wider!

Everyone in this story are so... sensible... in a sense that they think about things in depth and not just on the surface, you know. Take Kevin's advice to Harry for an example. And Lottie's to Louis.

But dang! I just want them to be reckless even just for a bit!

Chapter 9

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hi, I love you, you're being stupid, love me back.

LOUIS! DAMN! LOOK AT ALL THE SIGNS HARRY'S GIVING YOU!! URGH!! I'm probably gonna die in frustration at this rate.

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It's certainly not code for I love you back, at the very least

I don't even have words to say about this anymore oh my god. You boys are just soo...

*finds a table just to flip it just because*

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"... but I've had my fair share of break ups."

Really, Taylor? Geee... didn't notice that at all. But Harry, listen to him, will you? Why aren't the boys ever listen to anyone around them oh my god!

don't make Lina jumps into the story and smacks each one of you good god!!

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"... He's just not in love with me."

HARRY STOP RIGHT THERE!! ALL THIS DOUBTS IS REALLY STARTING TO PISS ME OFF! Why can't you believe that Louis loves you too? Just... WHY?!!



Harry, you make a big mistake bringing Taylor over oh my god! I can't continue feeling this way. I might die before this chapter is even over. AND TAYLOR WHAT ARE YOU SAYING??!! CAN'T YOU BE LESS VAGUE ABOUT WHAT YOU AND HARRY ARE DOING LAST NIGHT?!! AND NOW THERE'S ALL KINDS OF MISUNDERSTANDINGS AND MY HEART IS JUST NOT STRONG ENOUGH FOR THIS!!

AMANDA MY SAVIOUR! LINA LOVES YOU SO MUCH, WOMAN!



Please resolve this misunderstanding soon. Lina can't keep feeling like this. She's having heart palpitations just from reading this chapter and she's not sure she wants to cry or scream. Maybe a little bit of both?

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"Louis, I know you hate being praised in any way, but outside of your pretty little anal-retentive head, you are not actually terrible at being a human being, and you can fucking do this."

AMANDA! Lina wants to say this again. She really loves you, woman. You are just amazing!

And Taylor too. Lina loves you woman. Lina loves you so much. Lina is feeling a lot of emotions at the moment. And she just wants to say that she appreciates Taylor coming in trying to get the boys see straight and work on their issues.

Louis and Harry. My babies lou and harry. Don't make Lina goes there and lock you two together until you resolve your issues and get your feelings out to each other.

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And Harry kisses him.

FUCKING FINALLY OH MY GOD!!!!

Amanda, lina really loves you but why you interrupt them!!



Lina is satisfied with the ending of this chapter. She really is. She may cry a bit but that's okay.

Ah! You're such a wonderful author.

(as i don't have much much time here i would like to say i have caught myself up on this story and it is so so beautiful and i'm gonna comment on the most recent lovely chapter )

"Just answer your fucking phone, jackass." Oh my goodness. What a wonderful thing to jump into the chapter with. Louis, you might wanna answer that woman's calls, eh?

AMANDAAAA.

To me, Amanda is Louis' Zayn, y'know? Like, Harry's got Zayn (and by extension, Liam) calling him out on his bull and Louis' got Amanda swooning and winking and being great. Bless her.

"He might as well buy a pack of purple gel pens and start doodling 'Mr. Louis Styles' in a Lisa Frank notebook." THIS IS SO PERFECT I'M DEAD.

Amanda and Louis' friendship is adorable and perfect and bless it and it's so cute and asdfghjkl; awawawaw.

LOTTIE IS SUCH A TOMLINSON BWAHAHA.

"I'm actually, I realized a while ago, I'm... kind of in love with him?"



DUDEDUDEDUDEDUDEDUDE YES.

WAIT NO LOTTIE WHAT DO YOU MEAN "YOU'RE SURE" AY NO CHILL WITH THAT C'MON NOW YOU CAN'T DO THINGS LIKE THAT. YOU NEED TO CALM DOWN CUT THAT OUT OKAY NO THAT IS NOT WHAT YOU SAY.

DEEP INTO CHARA-FRICK NO.

nooooooooo lottie is tearing it all up and throwing it in louis' face that this may just be where he's at right now and not real and this needs to stop because it's hurting me too like help.

NO IT'S NOT ARTIFICIAL YOU SHIT STOP.



HE'LL SET YOU STRAIGHT HE'S DONE IT TO HARRY HE CAN DO IT TO YOU

HE WILL HELP GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER HOPEFULLY I PROMISE

BETTER YET WHERE'S AMANDA

AMANDA IS YOUR ZAYN OKAY WHERE IS SHE SHE NEEDS TO HELP YOU GET YOUR HEAD OUTTA YOUR ASS EVERYONE IN THIS RELATIONSHIP OF TWO NEEDS TO GET THEIR HEAD OUT OF THEIR ASS.

ahhhh a call from harry

i can breathe

"He really loves reminding you that he thought you were a shitty actor, doesn't he."

a voICE COACH POOR HARRY LIKE DAMN

"You left home when you were 17, completely alone, to go to college in the United States with no one you knew to learn how to act even though you knew everyone thought it was a pipe dream-- even your family, though they didn't say so. You left behind everything for what you love. You gave up so much to be the person you are, to have everything you have. And you deserve everything you have, every bit of praise that's been offered to you. That's the complete opposite of David."



I ADORE THAT SO MUCH OH MY GOODNESS MY HEART MY HEART MY HEART.

harry's hair gets to stay intact oh holy goodness thank lord because his hair is precious like you know how challenging it would be to get that back to his beautiful harry style(s)

hahahaha am i funny yet no okay

Ang sounds intense and it's amazing. I mean, clearly. He got Harry's butt a voice coach. Poor baby. aND HARRY SHOWS HIS INCREDIBLE FOND BY MAKING ALL OF THIS ABOUT LOUIS OH MY GOD.

friends oh lady honey sweetie baby pls

". . .but Louis is just so magnetic, I don't know a single person on set who hasn't fallen for him."



hLPe

IT IS A GIANT LOVE LETTER TO YOU LOUIS GET YOUR HEAD OUTTA YOUR Y'KNOW

sdfghjkl;vfegyf4huretgnbgtre not as giOVAnIN you shit nO why are yOUS o in deniall

still not funny

YODAMANDA

". . .this is my very professional opinion: what the fuck?"

don't worry x factor guy from before i found zayn he's here to fuck shit up

and bless liam aND YES HARRY YOU ARE ON SPEAKER PHONE SHUT UP DEAL WITH IT.

zayn is my favorite thing ever like i am completely satisfied with the job zayn liam and amanda do seriously because they are s o needed like extremely needed

YEAH CALL HIM ASSHOLE

inzayn

zayn is inzayn

i love it he's freaking wild and it's amazing

"You forget I'm just barely out of my teens," Harry reminds him. "I'll eat anything." and the lies are where.

YAY KEVIN DO I GET TO ADD KEVIN TO THE LIST HELL YEAH.

so we've got zayn liam amanda and kevin doing this right and harry and louis doing it like asses

awesome

wOW KEVIN DROPPING BOMBS HOLY but he's really quite right though like. . .dude harry coming out could screw his career up and put him in the running for certain roles and certain roles only

but then his happiness???

DAMMIT THE CONFLICTION



WAIT THE MISCOMMUNICATION IS GOING TO GET WORSE

i'm going to be screwed aren't i

yup

this is amazing and i'm gonna go cry because of what this has in store for me

I'd read the latest chapter before but I couldn't leave a comment because I was on my phone and my phone's stupid anyway. So I'm gonna re-read this and comment.

Be prepared.

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"I made you a sandwich this morning," Harry says happily when he barges into Louis's trailer, "It's cream cheese and cucumber."

Harry is such a housewife. They're so domestic it hurts my feels!

You know, reading this story really makes me want to read the actual book.

That scene is so intense. No wonder Harry gets so shaken up! Oh my god! He's such a brilliant actor! Both he and Louis. Both of them are so into their characters.

Sometimes, I'm not sure that they're acting anymore when they're in their scenes. Their characters somehow reflect how they really feel in real life. I think that's why they're so good in each scene. (This is from the point of view of someone who has never read the book. So I don't really know David and Giovanni's characters).

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Harry is so shamelessly sexy, and Louis adjusts his pants uncomfortably, because it's probably not normal get off to your best friend, even if he does have a brilliant smile and ridiculously long legs and eyes like a cartoon deer.

Louis, you naughty boy. Ah! YOU'RE SO DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH HIM! GAH! JUST KISS HIM OR SOMETHING!!

Harry, you're not biased. Louis just looks good in everything he wears because he's just that sexy.



THEY KISSED FUCKING FINALLY OH MY GOD I AM SO HAPPY I COULD DIE!!!!

I like Amanda and how tactful she is.

Louis serenading Harry...

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The definition of hell is wanting something this much, and being so close to having it, just an inch away, and being unable to move.

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What's hard is pulling himself away from Harry and settling back into Louis each time that Ang calls 'cut'.

See... I'd told you. Louis is now in a blurred line between David and himself. He's losing himself.

Awww... Louis will be separated from Harry.

This is amazing, as usual. And I definitely didn't notice any plothole.

Can't wait for the next updated!

OH MY GOD I CAN'T STAND THE SEXUAL TENSION BETWEEN THEM TWO!!! IT'S JUST!! YOU CAN CUT IT WITH A KNIFE, DAMNIT!!

Anyway, I love the update. I really, really, really can't wait for both of them to realize that they both feel the same way. Urgh! Please, one of you pick up the courage and confess already!

". . .they have the kind of chemistry he hasn't seen in years; the kind of chemistry that's going to bring movie critics to their knees." WELL GEE I CAN ONLY WONDER WHY. HM. WHAT A WONDER. WELL. GEE. HMM. JESUS.

"Louis the type of person who forgets to eat anyway, even when he's just in his flat in New York with no obligations, but with the addition of David's stress to his own, he never really feels all that hungry. He just feels sick and weak." nononowait nO no this sounds so bad i'm so attached to him and i don't want him all stressy and sick and NO WAIT LOUIS. you have me so hooked dude how ouch i.

LOUIS THIS IS SO NOT-OKAY N ONO NO.

CHARACTER BLEED. THAT IS DISMISSAL. YOU ARE DISMISSING THE ISSUE AND YOU, LIKE, CAN'T DO THAT, DUDE. CHARACTER BLEED. HARRY AVOIDING HIM IS AN EXAGGERATION. BARELY TALKING.



SHIT.

"It hurts to think that it's possible Harry was so disgusted by Louis's attraction to him that he's ignoring him. . ."



JESUS MY HEART HELP.

"Harry is trying to draw back from Louis."



ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME HARRY YOU KNOW IT'S SELFISH AND CRUEL AND YOU'RE GONNA DO IT ANYWAY Don'T TREAT HIM AS A FRIEND THEN DO THE THING DO THE FUCKING THING AND MAKE IT MORE THAN FRIENDS NO DO THE THING FUCK.

ZAYN AND LIAM ARE MY SAVING GRACES I'M GOING TO LOSE MY MIND JFC.

GOD HARRY



all three sex scenes all three sex scnes all tehre fuck

"It's okay," Harry says, brushing Louis's blond hair behind his ears and kissing his lips softly for a moment. "You're okay."

They lock eyes as they fake the climax, and Harry's not sure if he's looking at Louis or David."



no.

THEN I GET PANICKY GUILTY CRYING LOUIS MOTHER OF JESUS I CAN'T DO THIS I AM PULLING MY HAIR LEMME PULL HARRY'S HAIR LEMME DO SOMETHING THIS IS SO WRONG. BLESS AMANDA I LOVE YOU WE NEED YOU BECAUSE CLEARLY SOMEONE'S SCREWING UP OUT HERE.

"I've got to talk to him, don't I."



then we'VE GOT LOUIS BLACKING OUT AND FEVERS AND HARRY AND NONONO I'M GONNA CURL IN A BALL SOMEONE HELP ME I CAN'T CONTINUE BUT I HAVE TO CONTINUE AND DON'T GET ME STARTED ON THE LINE ABOUT LOUIS GETTING WHAT HE CAN TAKE NO.

you better hover harry u little shit.

This is still so amazing and so painful at once like ow no why but also hell yes more. I love this my goodness.

(may have gone a bit crazy with the gifs this time sorry )

Aw! You're the bestest, you know, you and your rad stories here. I hope you had fun in Seattle!

If I were on my computer, I will definitely, definitely leave a really long ass rambling comment on this one because that's what I do to stories that I lovr. As it is, I'm on my phone and I really suck at typing using touchscreen.

Anyway... Damn!!! I love this so ao ao so much!!! Like words can't even tell how much I love this. And I also love you for writing Larry. I've never read the book but I find that it's okay because yiur description is enough for me to kinda guess what the story is about.

Harry you shouldn't assune things you don't know and just listen to Zayn, man.

Louis you really should talk to someone. All this shutting people off is really not good for you.

I'm done. Sorry for obvious typos. I'd mentioned earlier about my inability to type properly and I'm too lazy to edit.

I can't wait for the next chapter!!

BLESS ZAYN THE AGENT, DUDE. LIKE. BLESS.

". . .Zayn looks distinctly unimpressed. "You're in a movie with him that contains three sex scenes between the two of you. I should think you might have."



ZAYN IS HORRIFIED OH MY GOOD LORD I LOVE HIM. yes harry c'mon he's loved you since he was eighteen like dude have you heard the song or nah. But no seriously bless Zayn because he is seeing clear through their bullshit and I adore him. He's what we needed in this fic - espECIALLY AFTER SOMEBODY WIPED THEIR DAMN MOUTH.

"I don't know how you can sleep at night."



mm your description again yay i'm so in love

'Because that's not an obvious metaphor,' THERE ARE SO MANY NICE AND QUOTABLE MOMENTS IN HERE I'M DYING. And when Harry and Louis just shift into their characters, it's such a wonderfully seamless, flawless thing.

"Did he really scare Harry off with the kiss in his trailer so badly that they can't even properly improvise together?"


I THOUGHT I COULD MAKE IT THROUGH A CHAPTER WITHOUT THIS BUT NOPE I JUST NEED SOME BRICK TO TOPPLE OFF OF.

Harry's not even speaking from the book anymore and oh my goodness gracious and asdfghjkl; nO ANG YOU BROKE THE MOMENT WHY

METHINKS HE'S NOT TALKING ABOUT DAVID ANYMORE AHAHAHA. BUT WAIT LOUIS DON'T RUN NOW YOU'RE THE ANG BREAKING THE MOMENT AGH.



"It's just, it's obvious that Harry doesn't return any feelings that Louis might have for him."


louis. freaking. tom. lin. son.

i. no.

hEY LOTTIE CAN YOU TALK SOME SENSE INTO YOUR BRO HE NEEDS IT.

he's losing something? how about hIS MIND. HIS MIND IS BEING LOST BECAUSE HE NEEDS HARRY TO KEEP IT IN PLACE AND HARRY AIN'T THERE TO DO IT BECAUSE HE THINKS HARRY'S FEELINGS ARE NOT THE SAME AS HIS. JEEEESUS. I'M SCREECHING.

haha, you're welcome! and thank you! the gif is everything i'm feeling towards this story and i just i can't even keep my balance on brick nope. i hope you have fun whilst out of town!

"They make him a dirty blond that's closer to light brown, which Louis is grateful for. . ."

did you just give me blonde louis like did you really just.


me right now.

Your description is wonderful, I can just see the perfection that is this moment and how they look and asdghkl; bless this. And Jesus, the "Harry does look much better. . ." paragraph is not good for my heart, it's so. I love that little paragraph. Agh.

"It's like Harry is watching him transform into David right before his eyes, and it's kind of magical." YOUR WORDS OH HOW THEY DO ME SO.

"(. . .who has been cast as Logan Lerman)"


YES TMZ PLAYS TOO MANY GAMES DON'T YOU LISTEN TO THEM BOY.

But my goodness the laugh of Harry's that makes Louis feel some type of way nonono my heart wasn't ready for this help. AND NOW THE ALMOST-LAP LAY HELLO.

this kiss.



The whole kiss scene just made me feel like I need to go back to bed and start a new day because this day has already ended. There is nothing that can top today after this kiss. I. Nothing.

HARRY YOU DID NOT WIPE YOUR DAMN MOUTH. YOU DID NOT. YOU DID NOT. NO. NO. I'M STRUGGLING SO HARD NOT TO SCREAM. HARRY. WHAT THE. WHAT.


this gif describes me too well when it comes to this fic i love it.

have i just found a larry oh my

YES

And it's so good, soso good already and it's only two chapters in and it's so unique already and I'm so ready to just throw myself into this world because actors, I have never seen actors and I'm just so excited and it's written so. freaking. well. and the last two or three lines of the second chapter just did things to my heart and it's not that hard to take in and

I adore this to pieces already, I'm so excited, ahhh.

Um, I have one word for you: Yes!

I want to read more. I'm super-excited to read what happens next and I definitely want them to be a couple, though it doesn't have to be official.

Loving the prologue and hoping to read more.