I was listening to arctic monkeys song “Do I wanna know?” and it's just perfect for this. By the way I love this chapter, it was amazing
February 13th, 2015 at 06:22am
Okay, here goes, I have returned.
I'm still having difficulty saying more than "wow," but, just, wow. This was so emotional. I don't think I've ever read a smut scene with so much emotion packed into it before, and I've read It All Goes Back to the Dogs (and the sequel), so that's saying a hella ton. You completely pulled me into Gerard's mind. I felt like I actually was him, but at the same time it didn't feel like you were trying to force us into him. It was just, all of your word choices just goddamn aligned to what Gerard was feeling so perfectly. You guided us so well. So well, in fact, I could tell Gerard was about to be anxious before he got anxious, or I could tell he was going to react negatively to Frank's lovey looks before he did, etc etc--not because it was predictable, but because you prefaced it so well with his thoughts. Having the incredible emotional link made the actual physical stuff more potent, too. It was so hot, because it wasn't plain. There was so much happening that my interest was completely captured all the way through, which never really happens for me (I generally end up skimming smutty scenes, no matter how well-written they are, because they're always generally the same old--blowjob, preparation, fucking, new position, fucking, coming, coming, blah). So, yeah, wow. Great work. This chapter has landed you the true spot as my glorified, all-time fave Frerard author, whereas before I was at least sort of in denial because I just love ASOTM so much. But this, this.
I've come out of denial, it's time Frank and Gerard did, too;)
Oh, and btw, Frank's explanations for everything were adorable. Like, what are we doing? "uhhh, proving a point ofc." ofc! that's how I like to prove my points, too--by fucking the hell out of my enemies. makes so much sense. And at the end when he was all "see I-I told you we'd be bad together," I almost pissed myself. Oh my god, Frank, stop it. Don't even try. You're just making yourself look even dumber than you are. XD Anyhow, can't wait for the next update, on any of your stories. Thanks so much for this, ugh. Actually, thanks so much for just existing and writing in general. A few months ago if you'd have told me I would be "discovering" a brilliant Frerard author I would have laughed you off, because Frerard's "dying" or whatever crap my roommate keeps telling me. You're the best and I feed off of your life force, sort of
