The Affair - Comments

What a powerful picture of good and bad!!!! I think they are done.......for now!!!!

Now the question is does she wise up and go back to Sid?

This story has got a hold on me.

I love this, I read the entire thing tonight and it is fabulous

It's okay to cry right?

I liked their pillow talk this last chapter. Great update!

Really loving this...clearly both struggling with right and wrong here. Sid would be the easy choice...can't wait to see where it goes

As passionate and deep as their feelings are, it is ultimately wrong on both their parts. I'm not seeing happily ever after in their future together.

Quite the triangle going on. I love the passion and the fire between Mike and Viv but really it can't fulfill her completely. Being Mikes side piece will not be enough down the road.

Such a good story - I really have no idea which way this will go, which is the mark of great writing!

Sid and Viv really are a lot alike. Their public mask is not really who they are and true friends is a rare thing for both of them.

Great story :) I really like the realisticness of the situation. Like really, inviting Viv to stay at the house with your wife and children ,really mike?!? I'm already attached to characters. I so dig Sid. He's my FAV!!

@ Thatmom
Your comment just made my night! There is nothing better than being completely invested in a story, and I so appreciate you investing in mine. Plus, that's exactly how I feel about Mike's reaction. It'll get better soon! :) Glad you liked chapter nine, too!

Chapter nine was everything I thought it would be .......SMOKIN' HOT!!!!! And then it was like a glass of ice water over my head. I get Mike felt guilty but he knew exactly what he was doing!!! What a jerk!!!

This is totally living up to all my expectations! As soon as I finish a chapter, I am already looking forward to the next - so glad that you are updating so frequently. And can I also say how much I appreciate the grammar and spelling!

It's working now:) I love the "dance" between Viv and Mike!! It's delicious:)

@ Thatmom
Oh good! Sorry it's not working on your computer. I'll keep working on it. And thanks for the encouragement! I'm so glad you're liking it. The sexual tension is definitely hot. I loved writing this story.

Really enjoying this...

It works fine on my phone. I've read every chapter and LOVE it!!!! The sexual tension is HOT!!!!

Is anyone else having this problem with the jumbled words when you go to a chapter? I can't seem to fix it. Any ideas?