I'm mildly disappointed I didn't stumble upon this gem earlier. Fee and Harry are very cute, however, I'm most curious about Allison and Niall. Keep up the good work!
Awe no Fee :( But, really, you did a great job of presenting Fee's feelings here. I can't wait for her and Harry to be on good terms again, but more than that, I look forward to Fee feeling better and getting real happiness, not just the surface stuff. Anyway, I loved the update and can't wait for the next!
Sorry I haven't been commenting on the last couple of chapters. I still love everything about this and literally check for a new update every few days ahaha. Xx
Oh my god I am in love. Niall's reaction to her changing in front of Harry. And then the intervention. I legit died. You wrote that perfectly! He was so exasperated and it was like the end of the world happened. So awesome. And his crush was Harry and Eli's secret! So cute.
I'm really excited to see how this story pans out and I cannot wait until you update again!!!!!
Oh my god I am in love. Niall's reaction to her changing in front of Harry. And then the intervention. I legit died. You wrote that perfectly! He was so exasperated and it was like the end of the world happened. So awesome. And his crush was Harry and Eli's secret! So cute.
I'm really excited to see how this story pans out and I cannot wait until you update again!!!!!
Okay, I really don't understand why this story doesn't have more comments. It's absolutely brilliant. I love that the story line isn't rushed. So many people are in a hurry to make the characters fall in love. I'm happy that Harry and Fiona didn't instantly like each other. The development of each character is just mind blowing, and honestly this story warms my heart. Please update soon.
Hey, please keep posting updates on Mibba for Crooked Heart.
Everything about this chapter is perfect. I read Bloom before this, and I loved the development of Imogen and Harry's relationship in that, but I think here with Fee and Harry it's even better. Perhaps it is because this is AU, but I think it's also because you're growing as a writer, which is always awesome to see.
I loved this update! Favourite part: “Did we just have a conversation about sex without saying the word sex?” “I think we did. High five?” “No.” So funny. I like died. And how he visited her at work. That was very cute. I like how you are portraying their relationship at the moment. I just hope something extreme goes wrong and it's like super awkward again. I'm excited to see where you take this. Update soon please!!!
As a reader of most of your stories, I appreciate the realistic progression of your plots (even though it's a fanfic). Sometimes I find it frustrating that writers portray their characters a certain way only to have them make decision that are not in line with their personality. But I think that you have done a really good job with Fiona. I love watching the way Fiona and Harry's relationship has developed and can't wait to see where they go!
Okay I have literally been a fan of your stories for like, forever. I'm sorry for being such a silent reader. You're so talented. Your writing style is amazing and I'm drawn in and completely enraptured every chapter. I check every day for updates if though I know they only come weekly hoping for a surprise update or something. Can't wait for the next!
I literally just read the first page and I was in love. your writing style is incredible and I was drawn in immediately to the story line. amazing job and I can't wait for the update.
I feel like no one is commenting! Your update waw amazing, as usual. And I'm extremely angry at you now, Can you update soon, so many my anger will subside and obviously, I'd like to know what happens next!
btw a part of me wants to see something between Fiona and Niall haha is that so weird? xD