Play Dead - Comments

Just read this again, it's such a sweet short story, and their chemistry is just adorable! Love your writing, it's so easily digestable... the ending just kills me though!

Ah fuck you made me cry! I binge read this... and I loved this so much, the character development was so organic! You're talented

That was a terrible ending, just because A) I love her mom and I want everything to be okay with her; B) she had to leave Ville...No. Just NO. You and your cliffhangers. Chapters that end in the cliffhanger fashion suck, but an entire story ending that way????? You're killing me. You'd better start posting that sequel soon, missy!

Oh God, I've missed so much!!!!! Stupid job and stupid boy... >_< Anywho, I'M SO HAPPY THEY HAD SEX!!!!!!!!! I fucking love them together. And the group of friends she has in Helsinki. Too adorable <3 She's being an artist and living her dream and then--Jason. Why would you do this to me????? I can't take it. I agree with Ville. Her life is in Finland with him. She should probably visit New York and see her uncle and Rosie and all that jazz, but she can't actually move back. She just can't! You'd better update again soon. I swear, I'll keep up from now on.

Awh they're so sweet together <3

Ville's so sweet

Haha like others mentioned that 'raging erection' comment

That was one of the most refreshing sex scenes I've read. Like, my god, it was actually sexy

I can't wait to see how their relationship develops :D

My favorite part of this chapter is how blunt Ville is. Haha.
Seriously, if you are going to have sex with someone, there is no point in being shy about it.
I just hope she doesn’t lose sight of her art career just because she’s dating a sexy rock star!

Lmao! Raging erection! I love this story and cannot wait for more. <3 I'm interested to see what the conflict is going to be.

Raging erection lol im so looking forward to more. Thanks for the update

She's so sensible and it's refreshing to read that. Great chapter :)

This chapter was PERFECT!
I appreciate you made them wait, its way more exciting that way anyhow!
I also think you should have Miri sign up for language classes soon haha!

(oh and I seriously NEED all of the clothing you post on polyvore! you have fucking cool taste!)

TEASE :P

Ahhhh love it

Loved this last chapter! You can really feel the chemistry between them!

Loved this last chapter! You can really feel the chemistry between them!

Whilst I, along with many others no doubt, was hoping for them both to give in and get tangled in those sheets I am glad that it didn't happen. It's nice to see that you are allowing for development and not dropping your story for the sake of feeding our needs.

I just hope Miri allows herself to be loved and wanted and not push Ville away too much.

I look forward to another update. Not many stories seem to update anymore on here but I am more than happy that this one is.

I love her relationship with her mom. Reminds me of me and my mom.

So happy that she is feeling positive about her situation for the first time in a while! I hope she doesn't ruin her own happiness by over-thinking her relationship with Ville and what she wants from it, although I will definitely be able to relate if she does.

It's like a breath of fresh air reading your story. I really enjoy your style of writing and it gives me my Valo fix.

I look forward to your next update. :)

I really dig your story. I have enjoyed losing sleep over the last hour reading the chapters in completion, excited for your next update!