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  • pennycausesdread

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    I really dig your story. I have enjoyed losing sleep over the last hour reading the chapters in completion, excited for your next update!
    April 19th, 2015 at 09:32am
  • cciara19

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    Am I the only one who didn't think they 'banged'? Haha.

    Your writing is really great, the plot is not as cliche or obvious as some of the other stuff on this site, if that makes sense?
    Every time I think I know whats coming next, you go a slightly different way.
    I LOVE your writing style. and this story!
    April 4th, 2015 at 08:57am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Sorry for the double post. -.-
    April 4th, 2015 at 05:50am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I didn't think she banged Ville; I thought she might have banged Jussi...because in that group, if I couldn't have Ville, I'd definitely take Jussi. tehe I'm glad he took the news well. She needs him; he has no idea how much. I want him to feel comfortable enough to kiss her, too! Lol. I'm impatiently waiting for the romance to begin.
    April 4th, 2015 at 05:50am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    YOU'RE BRINGING IN THE 69 EYES! Crazy I'm so excited for this! Can't wait to see who she wakes up with...though I have a suspicion.
    April 2nd, 2015 at 12:37am
  • tiffanyinwonderland

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    Uh ooohhhhh
    March 28th, 2015 at 06:32pm
  • karolaina

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    I like it Very Happy
    March 28th, 2015 at 07:44am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Now she's not so much a stranger in a strange land (yes, that was a 30 Seconds to Mars reference). Shit, I wish I could go to Finland and my first friend be Ville Valo... Happy face Lucky lady.
    March 24th, 2015 at 09:28pm
  • Join the Masquerade

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    I'm glad she's found a friend in him :)
    March 23rd, 2015 at 05:47pm
  • tiffanyinwonderland

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    Looking forward to how this is going to go
    March 23rd, 2015 at 03:09pm
  • Join the Masquerade

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    How weird was it to give someone a sketch that you’d done of him? He must think that someone in this coffee shop was a creep.

    LOL like some weird fan had been stalking him and drawing him in the shadows :P

    He had that look, and based on how deep his voice was, he probably had a singing voice that could rattle the walls.

    Sure rattles my walls File

    I'm so happy they've finally met, and that she's beginning to sort herself out a bit more :)
    March 2nd, 2015 at 08:14pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    OH MY GOD WE HAVE CONTACT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Crazy

    The fact that she gave him the sketch reminds me of me and my BFF, oddly enough. Back in the early days of our friendship, she was forever drawing me random pictures of the band guys I liked. Lol. I still have Davey Havok and Ville Valo. Then she painted me as a fairy. But I digress.

    I love this story. I can't even say how much. <3
    March 2nd, 2015 at 06:27pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    OH MY GOD WE HAVE CONTACT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Crazy

    The fact that she gave him the sketch reminds me of me and my BFF, oddly enough. Back in the early days of our friendship, she was forever drawing me random pictures of the band guys I liked. Lol. I still have Davey Havok and Ville Valo. Then she painted me as a fairy. But I digress.

    I love this story. I can't even say how much. <3
    March 2nd, 2015 at 06:26pm
  • tiffanyinwonderland

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    Ty for the update
    March 1st, 2015 at 05:13am
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    Who knew that after years of young professionals and entrepreneurs, a scruffy rocker type would be the one who caught my eye?

    Naughty

    Naww I love this girl. She's so hurt at the moment from her loss but I can't wait for her to find herself :)
    February 19th, 2015 at 05:28pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I'm caught back up! So now she has run into him twice...I can't wait for them to actually speak. In Love But reading her inner turmoil is breaking my heart, and I hate that the media has found her. She has so much to work through and even though I know she had to get out of NY, she now has no one close by to help her. Sad
    February 16th, 2015 at 02:53am
  • barbarienne

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    I'm so addicted to this story! I cannot wait for the next update!
    February 15th, 2015 at 01:55am
  • tiffanyinwonderland

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    Getting very interesting. Thank you for the update. Looking forward to the next.
    February 7th, 2015 at 01:44am
  • Synyster Vengance

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    Ohhhhhhhh!
    January 29th, 2015 at 04:36am
  • tiffanyinwonderland

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    @ Join the Masquerade
    Agreed
    January 28th, 2015 at 04:41pm