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  • bessie162

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    Just binge read this story & I love it !! Smile hope you continue on with it x
    April 19th, 2017 at 06:00am
  • Baloobear

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    Please tell me there is more to come! And preferably soon, I don't how long I can go without this story.
    August 28th, 2016 at 06:07am
  • daydreamz

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    I hope you continue this soon!
    March 21st, 2016 at 12:51am
  • beso4996

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    ok i love this story sm; it's the best John one I've read. Hope you update soon but no pressure! I know uni can take up a lot of time.
    January 7th, 2016 at 06:02am
  • Supersonicskyline

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    im only on chapter 9 but im in love with this story and had to tell yo!! okay back to reading! <3
    October 13th, 2015 at 10:49pm
  • picketfence1201

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    @ Olive-Oyl
    ahhh, I never even thought about that! haha.
    Hope you're enjoying it! Mr. Green
    August 5th, 2015 at 05:47am
  • ecto gammat.

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    I've only just found this, and I'm just on chapter five, I think, but its so cute! At first I thought two of the three boys in the beginning (alex and joel) were part of this century? Anyways, hopefully I can produce a better comment when I've caught up! I hope you're well!
    August 5th, 2015 at 01:30am
  • ecto gammat.

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    I've only just found this, and I'm just on chapter five, I think, but its so cute! At first I thought two of the three boys in the beginning (alex and joel) were part of this century? Anyways, hopefully I can produce a better comment when I've caught up! I hope you're well!
    August 5th, 2015 at 01:30am
  • daydreamz

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    Dang, I missed this. I'm definitely still interested in this story!
    August 5th, 2015 at 01:23am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ sans sheriff.
    Yay!
    P.S. still [im]patiently waiting and wishing for news on your John story! Give me somethingggg! Hahaha
    June 8th, 2015 at 03:32am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ carpe yolo
    OH EM GEE WOW! not only was that the longest comment ive ever recieved, it was also the most detailed. I am so so so grateful for all the nice things youve said about Burn. Ive worked super hard on creating an original, entertaining story and i am so happy you have enjoyed it!! Wow ! Thanks so much!!
    June 8th, 2015 at 03:29am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ Shelbysaurusrex
    No thats not bad at all! I wish there were more Garrett stories. I went through a phase once where he was my fave in The Maine. Hahaha
    June 8th, 2015 at 03:26am
  • carpe yolo

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    I just found this story and I've now spent an entire day binge reading all 20 chapters you have posted at once and it was completely worth it. I have nothing but great things to say about this story and the way you've written it! It's incredibly well written and has such an original plot, unlike any other John story I've read on here before. The way you've written Viola makes her so relatable and I feel like I really get to understand her emotions and the process she's gone through while falling in love with John. The last few chapters are especially wonderful as Viola and John are so in love, and I selfishly hope it stays as happy and upbeat for the remainder of the story as I've become so attatched to these characters that I want them to have nothing but the happiest ending possible hahah. I can't wait to read more!
    June 8th, 2015 at 01:55am
  • LadyWolverine0421

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    I'm so glad you updated! This is so so cute! Viola and John are so adorable. And is it bad that I'm pretending I'm Rose because of how much I love my Garrett? xD please update again soon!
    June 5th, 2015 at 10:55pm
  • OvercastGirl

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    This was so so so cute I'm excited for the next chapter!!
    June 5th, 2015 at 05:44pm
  • error404

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    My cheeks hurt for smiling for two straight chapters but I loveeeeed every bit if that pain! haha
    June 4th, 2015 at 11:46pm
  • daydreamz

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    John and Viola are extremely adorable.
    June 4th, 2015 at 10:56pm
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    @ picketfence1201
    I've just begun writing it and I told myself I'll only post it when it's completely finished because I tend to start writing, start posting, and then never end the story x-x haha but I will!
    June 4th, 2015 at 04:28pm
  • picketfence1201

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    @ sans sheriff.
    I would so read it!!!! Please let me know when you do start to write & post it! :D
    June 3rd, 2015 at 04:31pm
  • picketfence1201

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    @ OvercastGirl
    hahaha omg I thought about it but didn't want it to turn into full on smut.Embarassed
    Thank you so much for reading and replying!!!
    June 3rd, 2015 at 04:28pm