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  • daydreamz

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    Oh my god! Finally. Took those two long enough to lock lips!
    March 19th, 2015 at 10:58pm
  • LadyWolverine0421

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    OH MY GAAAAAHHHD this is so freaking cute. I swear to gods. I can't wait to read more
    March 19th, 2015 at 10:00pm
  • picketfence1201

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    @ cobain
    Ommggggg yay!!! thanks so much. Mr. Green
    March 19th, 2015 at 08:54pm
  • cobain

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    that was so cute that i'm smiling right now. i can't wait for more oh my god
    March 19th, 2015 at 08:35pm
  • daydreamz

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    Really excited for the next chapter!
    March 18th, 2015 at 10:22pm
  • xxblackxxrosesxx

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    update asap please! your story is just so good!
    March 18th, 2015 at 10:08am
  • daydreamz

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    Yes you're killing me too! Garrett mostly. If he wouldn't have walked in they would have kissed! :(
    March 7th, 2015 at 04:56pm
  • amylover13

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    I am literally obsessed with this story! I keep waiting for them to kiss! Hopefully four words does not mean he doesn't feel the same for her. Update soon!
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:16pm
  • amylover13

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    I am literally obsessed with this story! I keep waiting for them to kiss! Hopefully four words does not mean he doesn't feel the same for her. Update soon!
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:16pm
  • OvercastGirl

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    I really really really hope that doesn't mean John doesn't love viola...
    February 18th, 2015 at 06:21am
  • cobain

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    was not expecting these four words to come into this, but i love it. cant wait for more!!!
    February 18th, 2015 at 05:33am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ everdeen
    Hmm, I like that take on Viola. Interesting. :D
    Maybe she's submissive because Caleb gives her no choice?
    February 17th, 2015 at 11:18pm
  • everdeen

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    Viola annoys me a little, I confess, wanted her to be a little less ... submissive? I understand she likes Caleb and don't want to lose his friendship, but he has to stop thinking that he owns her. Live your life, girl!
    February 12th, 2015 at 05:10pm
  • picketfence1201

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    @ arizonaskies
    Thank you so much for commenting! I'm trying to pump out chapters as quickly as possible! Stay tuned :)
    February 11th, 2015 at 07:20pm
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    @ OvercastGirl
    Same, but with John. Mr. Green Double oops.
    February 11th, 2015 at 06:19am
  • OvercastGirl

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    @ picketfence1201
    Yeah, I totally get that. I'm honestly glad he never puts his hands on her, because it shows a little more of a dynamic - like, you don't have to touch someone to be abusive. I'm also kind of attached to Viola oops! ;)
    February 11th, 2015 at 05:42am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ OvercastGirl
    I wanted to make him sort of feel like that, but not in a way where he ever puts his hands on her, you know? It's like he's emotionally abusive...if that's even the correct word for it, haha. It's so hard to write his part, because I want him to come off in such a strong, protective way--but I'm glad you seem to see where I'm coming from! :) :) :)
    February 11th, 2015 at 04:25am
  • OvercastGirl

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    Two in a day?? You go, girl!
    Also, I'm stoked for them to finally get together and cut Caleb out of the picture. He's kind of abusive if you ask me.
    February 11th, 2015 at 04:13am
  • cobain

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    @ picketfence1201
    you better post soon!!!!
    February 11th, 2015 at 02:50am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ cobain
    yay!!! Thank you for commenting. It's mine also, but I'm so excited for one that's yet to come! :)
    February 11th, 2015 at 12:44am
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