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  • error404

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    @ picketfence1201
    It's MY pleasure! Reading your story made me more motivated to write one of my own ft. John :D
    June 3rd, 2015 at 12:07pm
  • OvercastGirl

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    ngl I wish you had gone into detail a bit more ;) but i really really love this story. like... this is one of my favorites
    June 3rd, 2015 at 06:16am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ daydreamz
    yay! 2 chapters to read, haha. And thank you so much! Glad you are still enjoying it. :)
    June 3rd, 2015 at 05:38am
  • daydreamz

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    So I somehow missed when you posted the chapter before this one so I had 2 new chapters to read! It was a nice surprise. Also, don't worry about it being too raunchy. It wasn't. :) excited for more of this!
    June 3rd, 2015 at 05:35am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ sans sheriff.

    OH EM GEE. That comment made me so absolutely freaking happy. THANK YOU SO MUCH YOU LOVELY PERSON. Mr. Green Mr. Green
    P.S. I'm glad John isn't stereotypical, I tried so hard to make him NORMAL acting. haha
    June 3rd, 2015 at 04:13am
  • error404

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    I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY! You know what time it is right now? 23:25. I told myself I was just gonna check it out and here I am, an hour later, feeling all sorts of wonderful emotions! I love the plot, the characters, and how John is not that stereotypical fan-fiction sad guy. I giggle every time something cute happens and urgh, I just LOVE this! ♡
    June 2nd, 2015 at 11:26pm
  • OvercastGirl

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    I love this so so much!
    June 2nd, 2015 at 06:16am
  • bannafool

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    @ picketfence1201
    I love this story! I'll always enjoy reading your work
    May 18th, 2015 at 07:41pm
  • picketfence1201

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    @ bannafool
    Aww, thank you for reading! Mr. Green
    May 7th, 2015 at 06:43am
  • Bale

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    Love this story more everytime you update!
    May 7th, 2015 at 01:35am
  • LadyWolverine0421

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    She's inside her head a lot. Like John said, she worries so much and doesn't give herself a chance to breath. If Caleb really loved her, he wouldn't have been such an ass. There definitely is a difference between love and dominance. He needs to find the line. John is so amazing and sweet to her. I love it.
    May 5th, 2015 at 11:59pm
  • bannafool

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    This chapter was super cute. Their first date, awww. It's hard to go from one guy to one who is completely different, but John is different for the better. Caleb was so jealous, and possessive and controlling. Cannot wait for the next chapter<3
    May 5th, 2015 at 10:10pm
  • cobain

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    this is soooo good. im really stoked to see what's going to happen between her and john. the gif is top notch by the way. how is he even real?
    May 5th, 2015 at 09:25pm
  • beso4996

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    literally stayed up until 4am reading this bc it's so good! this story is killing me the characters are so well written seriously i'm in love w this
    May 4th, 2015 at 07:12am
  • OvercastGirl

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    I'm in love with their relationship... kind of glad they got caught, though. I feel like it's best if they take it slow until she gets things sorted with Caleb
    May 3rd, 2015 at 07:32am
  • LadyWolverine0421

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    This is so cute! I am so excited to read more (:
    May 2nd, 2015 at 05:55pm
  • bannafool

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    love this story. so glad they are finally together! hope caleb stays away! update soon<3
    April 19th, 2015 at 11:13pm
  • kanitz

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    UPDATE SOON PLEASE AAHH
    April 8th, 2015 at 03:49pm
  • OvercastGirl

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    Ughhhhh finally!! Very Happy Very Happy
    March 23rd, 2015 at 12:01am
  • picketfence1201

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    @ TheDoctorsCompanion
    Thank you!!! so glad you liked it. :D :D

    @ daydreamz
    And rightttt? I feel the same tbh hahaha. :P
    P.S. love that we both have Sierra K as our profile pics :*
    March 20th, 2015 at 03:53am