@ FullMoon2012 Well thanks! I always find it a bit cringeworthy when I read back on things I wrote a few years back...(just because I feel like my writing style has changed a lot since then) so if someone said that to me and meant it in a critical way, I wouldn’t be that surprised! Lol
@ dreamingyouhere Well, I would like to clarify what I meant by confusing. xD It flowed neatly; their conversations were ACE! Entertaining and believable to the max. I think starting a new paragraph for every new speaker and clarifying in that paragraph who's doing the speaking would make it easier to follow. But I can probably see why you didn't do that, as the paragraphs would have been super short. Either way I enjoyed reading, that was quite a trip. I'm glad there are more chapters to come!
@ FullMoon2012 I mean, the dialogue is confusing to even me now! Ha. Probably because all of my writing from a few years ago was written and posted from an iPhone AND to add on to it, I was horrible about proofreading anything! Hopefully the next few chapters (which I haven’t even written) will be better for all of us. Lol
I’m glad you like it though...even with the confusion!