Midnight - Comments

I'm so fascinated with this story, I adore it ohhhh so much! Haha can't wait for more :)

Love it! Update soon please

@ whoa.itsjess
Thank you! Glad you like it!

Wooooow! I don't know how long the wait was before, but I am glad you are back, this is incredible writing! I adore this story & really really really hope you continue it soon!! :)

i don't want to wait. i don't want to wait. i don't want to wait!!!!!

update please!!!!

YES. YES YES YES. YESSSS. AMEN. Definitely worth the wait. xx

OH MY GOD!! YESSSS! FINALLY!!!!
urgh.. They are too cute... can't handle this..

I love them together. Just love them.

OH MY GOD JUST DATE ALREADY
But really. This was just what I needed, but also aggravating because he needs to just fricking go for it. They both do. Anticipating the next chapter!! xx

Aw man, Zayn leaving - I kinda knew it would happen in this story, but I like that you're keeping it real. Ahhh every cute moment Londyn and Harry have make me so anxious for them to finally get together. Excited! xx

Ahhhhh loved this chapter! Makes me giggle because they totally have feelings for each other. TOTALLY. And I am ready for them to acknowledge them. Looking forward to the next update! xx

i want like 3 book sequels at the most!!!!!!!!O.O

OHMYGOSH They are developing feelings for each other. This is beautiful. I'm so excited. Also the way you're writing this is amazing because it's not rushed and it's not coarse. Their relationship is so tender. Very excited for the next update! xx

oh my god their getting feelings

aaahhhhh i want them to fall in love so hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

does that make sense??????????????

aaahhhhh i want them to fall in love so hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

does that make sense??????????????

@ Abmora01
You'll just have to wait and see!!

@ the_truth_hurts
Just know, if I was the crying type I would have done so over your comment. Haha. But...since I'm not, I'll simply say thank you! I truly am flattered that you feel that way about it and even more so that you see the story the way you do. Your comment definitely made my day, and I hope you continue to read Midnight! :)

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So.... This is brilliant. Absolutely, beautifully, incredibly brilliant. I am head over heels in love with this story and every time I log on to this fantastic place my first instinct is to check and find out if this has been updated.

Harry's dialogue is so fluid. The rest of the boys are all so...themselves. This story is who they really are. This story showcases their traits without shoving them down the readers' throat. This story has an arc that, though it's only in its wee days, is already flawlessly forming and bound to create a powerful climax and emotional resolution. The dynamic of each boy with the other four is absolutely perfect.

However - and this is so unusual in fanfiction, if we're all honest with ourselves - my favorite part of this story, by far, is Londyn Jensen. She's real. I care about her, and as a character, I believe her. She is consistent, lovable, hilarious most of the time but down to earth and serious when she needs to be. Her path in London is believable. Their awareness of the media and public view of their relationship is spot on. There has not yet been a point where I rolled my eyes and thought, "Oi, this would never happen. Ever." Frankly, the story fits reality without being limited by it.

Each event moves your story forward. Nothing holds it back. Londyn has great relationships with everybody. The banter about Taylor Swift is so much fun, and Lou makes me laugh every time. You are an extremely talented writer, and I am honestly in love with "Midnight".

I cannot wait for your next chapter - and I already know it will be amazing! <3