Good second chapter (: Can't wait for more
January 19th, 2015 at 12:53am
Fenris - Comments
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Your first original? That's so exciting! And I think you're off to a great start here. :] I'm looking forward to finding out how Daleyza came to this point in time and how Henry fits into everything. Can't wait to see more on Fenris' character as well, so update soon! I'm going to subscribe and follow up as you go along with this.January 14th, 2015 at 10:24pm
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oooo! I'm very excited about where ever this may go! At first I wasn't sure if I would like it or not, only because I'm a ridiculously picky reader, but I loved this and I can't wait for more!January 14th, 2015 at 04:45am
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definitely looking forward to this
update soon! January 13th, 2015 at 08:38pm -
Great first chapter! I noticed just a few tiny things, like "Slowly, cautiously, I slowly crawled..." it's kind of redundant to say slowly again. But it was really good, and definitely made me want to keep reading!January 13th, 2015 at 01:01pm
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Can't wait for more! Update soon, please!January 11th, 2015 at 09:06pm
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Well, the layout's good and the summary was good too. Can't wait to read more.January 9th, 2015 at 10:20pm
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I was only able to read the summary, but it was very promising. You said you didn't plan on doing an original, is this the first?January 9th, 2015 at 08:15pm
