Nirvana - Comments

Still want to punch James. It's completely casual.

Gahhhhh in love with this story!! I can't wait to see what's next for James and Harley. On one hand I want her to forgive James and see their relationship grow stronger through it all. But on the other hand he was so cruel to her, and that would be difficult :( but I love them together. Gahhhh I just hope he grovells and makes it up to her and they can be happy again

Maybe it’s a good thing he doesn’t have food in the house. It prevents him from accidentally burning it down. I like the grapefruit touch though.

"Kelly at least likes dogs more than she wants to beat me with a meat tenderizer.” – hahahaha, but it’s close. Very very close.

JUST LOVE THE DOG, IT’S NOT A HARD THING TO DO!!!

Ughh, the whole man cave/glasses thing was the icing on the cake. The dagger in the friggin heart. I would be lying if I said that I hate seeing James feeling like the biggest jackass on the face of the Earth. Like he fucked up more than me on a math test.

Not all heroes wear capes. Some wear goalie equipment and look like yetis. And on the other side of things. not all villains have two faces or talk in riddles or act like penguins. Some have tatts, nice hair and teeth that are too white for any person to have. I guess they have the penguin thing in common though…

“Is she drunk?” – No, people just sleep on the floor and smell of alcohol regularly. And shouldn’t Shea be used to having humans puke on him? He has a kid after all. But good job on the bun thing. Hahahahaha

I know I would want to drive my car of a bridge if I had all girls. That’s a nightmare from hell. Can Satan really be that mean? I like to think I have a good relationship with him at times.

So heartbreaking for Harley. I think asshole is what James goes to when he doesn't know how to handle something.

Well, now they really need to talk...it's obviously not working avoiding each other!

My lord, James is being such a dumbass.
I feel terrible for Harley. Hopefully someone can knock him the hell out of whatever is going on in his head.

Great chapter! This is one of my favorite stories :)

Wow, shaking my head at James -- all men, actually. They're all the same. Anyway, can't wait to see how you bring them back from this one!

My jaw dropped when he said that he couldn’t trust her. Like really? After what he did and LIED about it?! No dude, doesn’t work that way. Stop making it seem like its Harley’s fault when you fucked up BIG time.

I must say, she took the news way better than I would have. I love all her comebacks too. I think James should have thrown Sarah into the river with the damn ring.

“I'm so glad you had the control to stop it from happening after she had your dick in her hands." – not gonna lie, I died laughing at this part. You go Harley, call him out on his stupidity!

What kills me is he was basically making her think it was her fault and then this whole I had a chance to cheat on you but didn't thing. James hate to tell you buddy but you did. You kissed a woman who wasn't your girlfriend, had her half naked in your hotel room not to mention what else happened but I am pretty damn sure thats cheating

She absolutely did the right thing. It still made me sad though:(

I think it's right that he told her... but damn, James is an idiot. And poor Harley

Oh god my fucking heart.

I'm going to punch James. I'm actually going to do it. I mean, love the guy, but are you that stupid to think that someone would just get over a fight that quickly? Especially someone you claim to love that much? If she got over it that quickly, she wouldn't be the woman he loves, plus it would show that she was just there for his status or something.

UGH. But, great chapter, since I'm obviously annoyed at this wonderful fictional version of James.

It was totally the right choice to tell her, however he chose a dumb way to go about it! Great chapter as always!

I hate when guys try to make you think you're the reason he wants out of a relationship. I really don't like James right now!!!

Whoooo, #70!!!

Dawww, baby cuddles!!! If they ever need a dogsitter then I got them.

‘James leaned down to give Kelly a gentle hug’ – He likes me! (insert tear face here)

"If this thing comes out a girl, don't question it if Craig goes missing." – he better hope and pray that it’s a boy. Girls are fine when they aren’t mine. And Craig better not be drinking! I’m taking our deal very seriously

"He'd need to have a girlfriend for that to happen." – How he doesn’t already have one is beyond me. He’s so pretty!

All I have to say is that hockey butts make me go nuts #dabooty

Few things. 1. I agree, do NOT mess with pregnant ladies. 2. Most definitely not gonna live. I’m gonna die right there. Just make sure my body gets home after dinner is over. And 3. Who the hell decided it was good for Harley to cook/use a knife?! Jesus take the wheel indeed. Which, by the way, I wonder how that came to be… 4. Yes Shea, the girls are more fun than you boys so, ha!

I’m going to punch James in his face until every one of this bright ass teeth come out. And people say girls pick fights out of the blue? Jeeze. Nice come back by Harley though!

So, as I’m tying this James gets a penalty. Maybe he needs to stay in the box for being an asshole!

Wow -- he'd better fess up soon...but I'll trust you that things will get better -- hopefully sooner rather than later!

Gahhh I really hope James tells her. She deserves to know. I feel bad for her! I can't wait to see what your "it gets better" means!

Why, why, why :( I feel so bad for Harley. However, I'll trust you when you say it will get better!!