Nirvana - Comments

Yay for an update! Next chapter will be interesting if Rich and James kind of confront reality...can't wait to read it!

Look at James making the step and getting her his jersey. It reminds me of high school when girls got boys football jersey to wear on game day

Men in suits. Men in suits. I repeat, MEN IN SUITS! You know how I feel about guys in suits. Ughh, can’t wait!

"I just know that the Flyers thing was hard on Shea, - thank God he didn’t end up there!

Nashville > Pittsburgh. Just saying.

I agree, I think he would've felt kind of hurt and reluctant to talk about Pittsburgh or the trade. It's kind of s slap in the face, really. So, glad Harley is helping him with that!

Bah, great chapter. These two are great together :)

You described the pain of the trade exactly how I thought he would feel. I'm glad he is sharing that with Harley. Great update:)

Love their interaction!!!

That was fast -- and cute! I also loved the diss of the Flyers. I won't wear black and orange together unless it's Halloween. And I mean, literally, handing out candy Halloween. I hate math, too. I'm not sure how I graduated...

Anyway, looking forward to more!

"I hate math." – Math is lame. But if James was really nice, he would pay for someone to do the math for her. Just saying.

"Craig got the game winner." – That’s my boy!!!!

I already said this to you, but it’s still funny. Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha purple. LOLZ

His mom really is a saint, but she really needs to teach him how to cook bacon. It’s essential.

Yeah, ‘numbers for good takeout places’. AKA, mine. I think I’m the one who is screwed. The food bill is going to be insane!

James made a face, "Flyers." – hahahaha, exactly my reaction

You would make her birthday Halloween. And don’t diss 4th of July, James. I will shove a firework in a place where the sun doesn’t shine. Just kidding, that a waste of a perfectly good firework. But still, watch it.

Phoenix also has snakes and scorpions. No thank you. Have fun with that. Ps. Please make sue he doesn’t paint a room purple.

They are too cute. Why do you have to do this to me?!

'Hopefully getting another few updates out this week' - hopefully means definite, right?

"I hate math." – Math is lame. But if James was really nice, he would pay for someone to do the math for her. Just saying.

"Craig got the game winner." – That’s my boy!!!!

I already said this to you, but it’s still funny. Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha purple. LOLZ

His mom really is a saint, but she really needs to teach him how to cook bacon. It’s essential.

Yeah, ‘numbers for good takeout places’. AKA, mine. I think I’m the one who is screwed. The food bill is going to be insane!

James made a face, "Flyers." – hahahaha, exactly my reaction

You would make her birthday Halloween. And don’t diss 4th of July, James. I will shove a firework in a place where the sun doesn’t shine. Just kidding, that a waste of a perfectly good firework. But still, watch it.

Phoenix also has snakes and scorpions. No thank you. Have fun with that. Ps. Please make sue he doesn’t paint a room purple.

They are too cute. Why do you have to do this to me?!

'Hopefully getting another few updates out this week' - hopefully means definite, right?

"Enough to buy a ring." – ohh, uhh..well then..

"He's not my anything." – Liar!! He’s at least your …. buddy. Can’t deny that. And the man bought you shoes! That’s saying something

MOOOOOARRRR. Rawr.

"I thought you said this was a one time thing?" – one, many. We’ll just say math isn’t her strong suit.

"That thing you do with your hips." – I’m guessing his hips don’t lie. Should we start calling him Shakiro? Ok, I’m not funny. This is what happens when I’m up past my bed time.

"Nah I'm more for the bathrooms of bars." – No. stop. So many germs. Blahhh

'Love, Rich.' – Well, that’s not awkward or anything…

'fuck me' smile?” – is that what we are calling it now? His dentist must make the big bucks

The two of you came waltzing out of the back looking guiltier than Charles Manson.” – BEST LINE OF ALL THE LINES!!!!

“I'm not so sure that was such a good idea.” – Yes it was! That was brilliant! Well played Shea and James.

I don’t think Shea has to worry about hurting James if something happens with him and Harley. Harley can use her new heels to hurt him with since they are basically a weapon. But if not, Shea can make an injury look like an accident with that shot that he has.

Well, well, well... things are heating up with James and Harley. I wonder what Rich will do when he finds out -- if he doesn't already know.

So happy

Hmm, does Rich still like Harley? Do I sense a little love triangle trouble? Yes? No? Maybe?

Oh Thanks Harley, being the joke of the locker room is every girls dream. Hahaha.

“You know girls, can't even go to the bathroom at a bar without another person.” – Or ever. Have you not seen what happened to Hermione when she went to the bathroom alone? A troll almost killed her. There are crazies in this world, Craig!

‘James waited a full seven minutes before he got up’ – Probably the longest 7 minutes of his life. But FINALLY some action between the two! The sexual attraction between the two was ridiculous!

Sorry this sucked. I was rushing because I have class. But great news! You’re allowed to update again since I commented. :)

Cliffhanger! No fair!!

: )

Yay for another update -- and part of the past revealed. Can't wait for more!

*love

Harley is awesome!! Live her:)

great job : )

Yeah Duhamel aged(es) pretty well .

Love your one liners