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stupify. (100)

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I really liked this.

You did a good job of making the three main characters people
can identify with. Even Jeff. I know it's just the second chapter,
and the characters aren't fully completed yet, but they do have
their identities.

Keep it up! :tehe:

October 17th, 2008 at 03:40pm
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good story, I'm surprised no one has commented yet *subscribes*

August 9th, 2008 at 10:45am

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