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  • stupify.

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    I really liked this.

    You did a good job of making the three main characters people
    can identify with. Even Jeff. I know it's just the second chapter,
    and the characters aren't fully completed yet, but they do have
    their identities.

    Keep it up! :tehe:
    October 17th, 2008 at 03:40pm
  • randomrebel

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    good story, I'm surprised no one has commented yet *subscribes*
    August 9th, 2008 at 10:45am
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