How Could I Make This More Poetic?

How Could I Make This More Poetic?
Language:
EN
Rating:
PG-13
Type:
True story
Publish date:
June 2nd, 2008
Last update:
October 17th, 2008
Last chapter:
9
Completed:
No
Layout:
Yes
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Original Story.