Okay, so you're telling me that this piece of shit is trying to break up the boys, AND he likes Supernatural? Supernatural is too good for him. Ugh. Ugh. No. Wyatt is a stupid stubborn fool and seriously needs slapped around a bit. Please and thank you.
@ CannibalsAreZombies haha! You're so not crazy. But seriously, don't feel obligated. I just want people to enjoy my writing and if not, that's okay because I love making characters interact and fight and all that good stuff in between. No need to tone down. I love it. xx
@ A. J. I'm glad! I felt like a crazy person going on a rant, but good writing is good writing. And this is gold. I feel morally obligated now to go back through and read the rest of your work. Perhaps I'll tone down my madness, lest I leave you with an unintelligible mess, haha.
Late to the party and just read this all in one shot. I find there is something I must say. You are genius.
Without a doubt, his gay trainer is going to cause problems. And I love you for this. When Wyatt had the accident, I was enraged. You gave him an easy out. You gave a distraction from his previous transgressions and limited his ability to commit more without in my opinion, making him prove himself satisfactorily. But then here comes this piece of shit and I hate him but holy fuck. In one character, you retained the realism of the entire piece. I thought for sure you were committing the sin of a lazy writer- writing off a problem without truly solving that. I apologize for my doubt, but I just want to reiterate that this was a stroke of brilliance.
Oh no! This is soooo sad! Bit maybe his dad is going to change his mind is going to accept wyatt an his life! The nett One is with The nephew that great News, cant wait for it!
@ Sarcastically Blunt Oh it will get better, but his recovery is hard especially after what Wyatt's been through in his past. That comes out later. He keeps his feelings bottled up-- most of them anyway. That and he's a very proud man. Being able to let people help is hard for him.
@ christhedork13 Hey! I am. Almost finished with it too. about 2 chps to go. =) I'm so happy you think I'm amazing at writing. What a wonderful comment. xx