@ Tipsy. just a quick note. i haven't read all your comments, but I did add Wyatt in the character pics. will come back later to reply to your review. ;)
Ch5: If I read about anymore heartbreaks, I'm sure I'll throttle ya bro. Why the Emilio breakup too? Your writing skill reached a whole new level with this story bro. I feel sadder after every line. And that's a compliment! :/ Goodness! Atleast they're talking I always say that's the best way to get through a situation. Oi, just how old is Wyatt? And Wyatt's pic isn't there in the character page!! Upload it!! And Erich and Levi too!! Aww, Wyatt is possessive! I love them both for now <3
I bet I'll finish what you have in another half hour. And because I dun wanna die with cliffhangers or excitement, I'll save the rest for tomorrow, hoping you'll update soon ^_^ Yep, I'm a bully alright haha xD
Heyyyaa!! No need to dread it, I'm not gonna give you long, long rants on this one. I'll be as concise as I can manage to be xD
Ch1: Ten hearts to Gavin <3 I love him! And the description in the beginning of the chapter was amazing. Wyatt hasn't seen any improvement, still can't sympathize with him xD But I think I'll come to like him in time. Also, I like the centered layout better! I hope you've kept it in the later chapters too ^_^
Ch2:"I'm fucking horny and I'd screw the next person or thing I see. In fact, the lamp looks inviting. Bet I can turn it on." Okay, I like Wyatt now XDXD Oh God, Wyatt is cute in a stupid sort of way xD And he's foul mouthed hahaha What more can I want in a lead character? *note the sarcasm* haha I am SO f*ing proud of Gavin! Love you man <3 Nice chapter ^^
Ch3: Can I say I don't believe Wyatt one bit? And I might not be so proud of Gavin anymore. I hope Wyatt won't hurt him. Wyatt, Wyatt, Wyatt. Man, just how distrusting can you be? He'll defs screw Gavin up too! I told you I didn't believe him :( I think I'm going to have more of an urge to bang my head in wall, with Wyatt than I had with Levi. My only solace then was that the story was completed! This ones not When will this be completed bro? Then I'd be sure of a happy ending at least. Yayyy!! Erich (<3) and Levi are back!! That's the only happy thing that happened in this chapter XDXD
Ch4: Aww<3 I guess I'm always going to absolutely love one of the boys in your stories, and want to kill the other XD I again love Gavin <3 But I'm not mad at Wyatt. I know how annoyingly logical cynical people can bee XD Haha You have it brother. I think I pity Wyatt now. :( This story is going to be wayy more angsty than Country Heir right? I have a feeling xD
I'm really looking forward to Colt and Austin's story now. But Wyatt and Gavin are driving me insane right now. Wyatt needs to just make a move and get his man back!