Ravenwood - Comments

I'm liking where this is going! That quote is definitely an awesome as well. I can't help but think about all the possible different directions this story could take, and I'm excited to see an update soon! Subscribed and recommended, your writing style is unique and beautiful.

If you don't mind, I've been on Mibba hiatus for quite some time, and am looking for new active writers to possibly provide feedback, since the regulars who did are now inactive or deactivated.

@ The Human Slayer
Thank you but I did not come up with that quote I just couldn't remember who said it, but I looked it up and it was Marilyn Monroe.

The entire quote is.

"I'm selfish, impatient, and insecure. I make mistakes. I am out of control, and at times hard to handle, but if you can't handle me at my worst, then you don't deserve me at my best.

I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you can appreciate them when they're right, you believe less so you eventually learn to trust no one but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together."

Given I think I edited it a bit.

I love the little dialog the mother says to her children. The part about people changing for us to let go just made so much sense to me. I find it amazing you came up with that on your own. I love the style of writing the story is being told in so far. The title attracted me, and the prologue wants me to read more.
Hope there is an update soon. I'm subscribing.