Crush, Crush - Comments

@ nailsntacks
I haven't decided on what is to come yet Thanks for the comment <3

Please put the next chapter up soon. The suspense on what is to come is killing me. I love how well written these character are and how you related back to how their old relationship was so well in this chapter. But seriously, you are killing me with anticipation.

@ kalajmic
Patience So do I actually haha. :P

@ ouijagraph
Aww that's adorable Thank you for the comment <3

I can't even begin to explain how much I can relate to Alison and her feelings for Gerard. Actually, a couple of weeks ago I heard someone ask my friend who I has helped me through a lot recently if I was his girlfriend and he didn't answer, I had that same flutter in my heart that Alison had. This fic and it's prequel mean an awful lot to me, hope you update soon :)

I am DYING for an update! I loved the story that came before it, so naturally I read this one, too! That last chapter is killing me, I want them to kiss or something!!!

Amazing as always!!! Is she ever going to talk to Gerard about their past? Suspense is killing me.

So happy to see the update! I totally understand hitting a block, but it's really nice to see you writing again :)

I loved the update! I really do hope you finish it and I hope they finally get together since this is the biggest lead up ever. Hope to see more soon.

@ backinyourhead_
I swear it's happening lol, I swear! I hit a block with it so it's taking ages , but thank you for the encouragement :)

I can't wait for the next update on this!

@ nailsntacks
I'm currently in the middle of exams but will have time to write after that :D So new chapter sometime towards the end of the month :)

You should put the next chapter up

Another beautiful chapter. I loved all of it, especially the part between Gerard and Alison toward the end. It feels so real, believable, and very relateable. Gerard seems like he's been forcing a smile, maybe more so than Alison thinks?

Aweeee, thank you so much for that little note at the end, made me smile more than you know :)

Aw maaaaaaaan I've missed this! Your writing is so heartfelt, I honestly feel a real connection with Alison, I really feel for her, and you have a way of touching on those emotions just perfectly :)

Gerard is holding back, I think, but Alison seems to be doing the same. She's hurt, and I can't say I blame her...

I hope you update soon :) xxx

Amazing update! I cannot describe the way I feel when I read these chapters, they're so full of mixed emotions and it only makes me want to read more! Please update soon! xoxo

Wow, that was a great update. You really captured how hard it is to make the first visit. I can't wait for more. Please update soon

@ Shi!
What a lovely comment :3 Thanks for your insights into this - it helps! I'm still learning the characters.
<3

@ ouijagraph
Thanks so much :)

@ nailsntacks
I dunno if that's good or bad haha. But thanks!

Oh hell, I step away from this site for a while and you decide to start updating this story! I should have come here sooner, or checked my emails...

Anyway, the first chapter was amazing, a great comeback, I was very curious to see how she would react around Gerard's presence. I love Alison even more now, it's clear that she has become a more mature person, but her insecurities still show that she hasn't changed that much.

The little insight on her past, on the second chapter, was one of my favorites so far. It's sad, or actually bittersweet, to see how she managed to live away from her friends, but struggling, she's a strong woman but sometimes there's not shame in asking for help.

Oh, and then there was this. "They had no pets and I discovered that the indoor plant he'd requested I water daily was actually plastic." I laughed so hard I actually snorted.

Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm already hooked on this!

I love this so much! I can relate to how Alison feels so much, and the interaction with Gerard, especially after so many years, I don't know it just feels so real! Looking forward to your next chapter :)