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  • OurLullaby

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    I love this. love love love. Had me giggling the whole way through. I am rooting for them. Love Ash. I want one. :) Pleasee update at soon as you can.
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    July 31st, 2015 at 04:03am
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    @ So_What_16
    no! it doesn't take away from the story at all! it's just a thing I do, I notice all typos... it's a curse hahaha.
    April 28th, 2015 at 06:16am
  • raystunna

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    @ So_What_16
    You're welcome! And I actually just read it so I apparently missed anything you might have done hah. :)
    April 27th, 2015 at 02:14pm
  • So_What_16

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    @ inhibitions
    Sorry about the typos. I try to read it over to get them out before a post, but I still miss some-_-'. I am not the best speller either:p. Feel free to let me know specific chapters where stuff doesn't make sense and I'll do my best to correct them asap. Typos always distract from the magic of the story and must be eliminated! lol Thanks so much for reading and commenting <333!
    April 27th, 2015 at 10:00am
  • mgn.

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    despite some typos, you write beautifully. I read all the chapters in one sitting and.... im in love with this story! update again soon! I'll be impatiently waiting! @ So_What_16
    April 27th, 2015 at 09:01am
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    @ onlyme_1998
    Thanks for the compliment and the comment. Please keep reading and I'll keep writing ^_^
    April 27th, 2015 at 08:58am
  • So_What_16

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    @ raystunna
    Sorry it took me so long at one point. I got all artsy and self depreciative. The story wasn't good enough for me yet so I didn't want to post anything. I hope you keep liking my story and reading. Thanks for leaving a comment.
    April 27th, 2015 at 08:57am
  • raystunna

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    Man I'm so into this story. I hope the next chapter comes out soon :) I check every day haha. Keep it up!
    April 26th, 2015 at 11:29pm
  • onlyme_1998

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    This story is amazing :) you are a phenomenal writer!! :D
    April 26th, 2015 at 08:59pm
  • redrockettruckstop

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    Man, I'm absolutely addicted to this story haha, you're doing an amazing job, cant wait to read more! :)
    March 16th, 2015 at 04:08am
  • So_What_16

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    @ DropDead4Me
    There's lots more to come, stay tuned. Thanks for reading. Thank you extra bunchs for commenting!
    March 8th, 2015 at 06:19am
  • amtulmibba

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    Hahaa :D
    March 7th, 2015 at 07:50am
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    @ Amtul.
    Yes, yes, good, good...the spell is working then hehehe^_~
    March 6th, 2015 at 08:51pm
  • DropDead4Me

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    Love your story! :) Can't wait for your next update.
    March 6th, 2015 at 07:42pm
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    March 6th, 2015 at 07:42pm
  • amtulmibba

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    I love just everything about him..But the most I love how determined he is to be with the girl..and how he gets jealous of she wearing shoes gifted by some other guy..that possessive attitude is something to die for..and how he just decides that she is his by getting the helmet and calling her his gf.. I think i am totally falling for him..
    March 6th, 2015 at 07:22pm
  • So_What_16

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    @ Amtul.
    what do you like about Ash(if you don't mind me asking)? What makes him effective as the male lead? How does he make you feel?
    March 6th, 2015 at 06:12pm
  • amtulmibba

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    @So_What_16
    excited and cant waittt :-)
    March 6th, 2015 at 06:03pm
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    @ Amtul.
    Thanks for the comment, there's still much more to come ^_^
    March 6th, 2015 at 05:59pm
  • amtulmibba

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    Love the story..I love Ash..plz update soon..cant waitt to knw wht happns next
    March 6th, 2015 at 01:35pm
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