I don't know, I just like the whole aspect of the story. It's different to anything I've ever read which is why I feel so attached? to it. You could make the chapters longer and make it more descriptive, but it's your story. You do whatever you want. :) I like Juliet, but she frustrates me. omg why did she do that?! I feel sorry for Ash, he planned for months and last minute she backed out. I wish she would let him in, but seeing that they just met and barely know much about each other, it should be subtle. Idk. I fell for Ash in the first chapter haha ^_^
@ timel0rd_ Stay tuned ^_^! Thanks bunches for your comments! If you don't mind me asking, what aspects of my story and or characters do you like? What could I work on? Is Juliet accessible, does she seem real? Are you falling for Ash because I'm just gonna say right now (because I gots stuff I haven't posted yet) I'm already in love.
Thanks ^_^ Glad you like it!