June 2nd, 2015 at 07:03am
@ Ruby-Red-Phoenix
Nobody can stay strong forever. We all have our little ticks that set us off. She had her five hours to herself and obviously wasn't ready for any closeness from him when she was still in shock, tired, and confused. After so much loss in her life already, it'd be hard to think of someone you're so in love with has had this little secret.
Apologies if you don't agree with my plot. I urge you to take a crack at your own though, it's not possible to appease everyone. I write this for fun, for people to enjoy. I appreciate criticism, but not being told that what I wrote isn't up to a standard that isn't even set.
Oh thank you so much! I hope you'll like what's coming next!