@ Ruby-Red-Phoenix Preach it, girl! I would word it the exact same way. Thank you so so much for noticing everything. It's a very rewarding feeling and this is why I love writing. :)
@ captainzetty Not a problem! It really bugs me when I see that in every story on this site. I feel like some of the writers on this site are afraid to portray them as being human and enjoying themselves. I'm pretty sure all of these men are doing a lot more than sitting around staring at nature. Shoot if I had millions of dollars I sure as hell wouldn't spend it only doing things that I can do when I'm broke...
Great chapter! I am loving this story, it is nice to not always see the same cookie cutter female character. Thanks for originality and real life personality add to Vera.
Great chapter! I am loving this story, it is nice to not always have the same cookie cutter female character. Thanks for originality and real life personality add to Vera.
Okay seriously these two are so sweet they're giving me a toothache. I'm excited to see how Tyler handles being on the road trip, because I think Vera overall will be okay and he'll just end up missing her like crazy. Which of course means endless chirping from the guys. I really hope Jordie gives him the worst of it.
Okay seriously these two are so sweet they're giving me a toothache. I'm excited to see how Tyler handles being on the road trip, because I think Vera overall will be okay and he'll just end up missing her like crazy. Which of course means endless chirping from the guys. I really hope Jordie gives him the worst of it.
@Thatmom
That's what I was thinking, thanks guys!