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helena_88 (100)

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seriously I just love reading this... and I sit here hoping that the chapter wont end

finnick hiding something and spending time with someone- that she doesn't know... is it annie?? I kinda hope not.. hahah

oooh it's almost time for them to find out that they might be going back into the arena.......

May 27th, 2015 at 08:01pm

helena_88 (100)

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oh shit... i mean wow.. ya know i've already said this- that the first ''try'' of this story was great but this re-write is so far soooooo god damn good

lovin all of the things that you're adding in here- to what happened in 4 during the time before snow decided on what to do in the quater quell(?)
..that finnick couldn't do anything to stop what happened...
and then the fact that her brother was killed....

May 26th, 2015 at 11:09am

helena_88 (100)

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ugh, this is soooo good

goosebumps and stuff..
lovin' how finnick got such a problem with the whole Crane thing.. it's so obvious.. and her being unable to tear her eyes away from his collarbones........
ooh, the thirteen symbol.... shit's about to go down

May 16th, 2015 at 06:55pm

helena_88 (100)

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heheh finnick isn't a fan of what her and crane ''had'' now is he?

he's so darn cute though, and when he pulled her to rest against his chest in the water and then gave her his shirt... *swoons*

April 4th, 2015 at 07:14pm

blanklikepaper (100)

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Omg yes. More please?!? I love this so muuuuch!

April 3rd, 2015 at 08:53pm

blanklikepaper (100)

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Omg yes. More please?!? I love this so muuuuch!

April 3rd, 2015 at 08:53pm

lumosmancer (150)

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lovin' it still! And the whole Crane thing is just ♥ I love little twists in stories like that

cute outfit as well! Keep writing!

April 2nd, 2015 at 10:47pm

helena_88 (100)

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hmm I don't remember if you had the crane angle before- BUT I like it

and now that she's worried that she'll have another man taking interest in her when crane is out of the picture.. at least she isn't in finnicks situation with loads of ppl wanting him....
lovin' the little details with the layouts of their homes and her feelings on things and stuff

April 1st, 2015 at 10:25pm

helena_88 (100)

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well I really liked the ''original'' version of this- though I can understand the feeling of her being seen as though she can't function without finnick holding her hand.. can't wait to see how you'll change it up- the start of it is awesome

March 31st, 2015 at 10:29pm

lumosmancer (150)

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Dude, you need to keep going with this! Its enchanting already! Also, compliments on the layout

March 31st, 2015 at 09:15pm