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  • helena_88

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    seriously I just love reading this... and I sit here hoping that the chapter wont end XD
    finnick hiding something and spending time with someone- that she doesn't know... is it annie?? I kinda hope not.. hahah XD
    oooh it's almost time for them to find out that they might be going back into the arena....... Sad
    May 27th, 2015 at 08:01pm
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    oh shit... i mean wow.. ya know i've already said this- that the first ''try'' of this story was great but this re-write is so far soooooo god damn good XD
    lovin all of the things that you're adding in here- to what happened in 4 during the time before snow decided on what to do in the quater quell(?)
    ..that finnick couldn't do anything to stop what happened...
    and then the fact that her brother was killed....
    May 26th, 2015 at 11:09am
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    ugh, this is soooo good XD goosebumps and stuff..
    lovin' how finnick got such a problem with the whole Crane thing.. it's so obvious.. and her being unable to tear her eyes away from his collarbones........
    ooh, the thirteen symbol.... shit's about to go down XD
    May 16th, 2015 at 06:55pm
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    heheh finnick isn't a fan of what her and crane ''had'' now is he? XD
    he's so darn cute though, and when he pulled her to rest against his chest in the water and then gave her his shirt... *swoons*
    April 4th, 2015 at 07:14pm
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    Omg yes. More please?!? I love this so muuuuch!
    April 3rd, 2015 at 08:53pm
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    Omg yes. More please?!? I love this so muuuuch!
    April 3rd, 2015 at 08:53pm
  • lumosmancer

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    lovin' it still! And the whole Crane thing is just ♥ I love little twists in stories like that tehe cute outfit as well! Keep writing! In Love
    April 2nd, 2015 at 10:47pm
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    hmm I don't remember if you had the crane angle before- BUT I like it XD and now that she's worried that she'll have another man taking interest in her when crane is out of the picture.. at least she isn't in finnicks situation with loads of ppl wanting him....
    lovin' the little details with the layouts of their homes and her feelings on things and stuff Cute
    April 1st, 2015 at 10:25pm
  • helena_88

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    well I really liked the ''original'' version of this- though I can understand the feeling of her being seen as though she can't function without finnick holding her hand.. can't wait to see how you'll change it up- the start of it is awesome XD
    March 31st, 2015 at 10:29pm
  • lumosmancer

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    Dude, you need to keep going with this! Its enchanting already! Also, compliments on the layout In Love
    March 31st, 2015 at 09:15pm
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