I Knew You Were Trouble - Comments

@ GrandominaGirl
I've had writers block for this story but don't worry I'm going to start writing the next chapter very soon, promise :) thank you for commenting and encouraging me to make a start on it!

Omg please update soon I love this story ❤

Oml I want everything to be okay now. I can't stand more heartbreak IRL or in stories lordy

@ cloud_3
Yay sequels

@ f50ShadesofFrackedUp
But things can always change...

@ f50ShadesofFrackedUp
Well... Good news is I do plan on making a squeal :p bad news is, I still have alot of stuff to happen in this story before I end it. I'm thinking maybe end it at chapter 25/30? Depends how smoothly my plan goes and if I stick with it...

Ah yes, the climax! You know what that means? They're gonna have a breakthrough after this. Then everything will be well, and you'll have to end the story, sadly. Then, you can make a sequel with more gang things (Srry I've read way too many gang stories and stories in general).

@ Gem_Jar93
Damn right he is ;) it's only natural for a man to protect what is his x

I loved dis chapter so much! #Oliisprotectingwhatshis

@ GiveMeTheKEYS!
Hun, your feedback is always so amazing and so helpful to me <3

I knew you was going to enjoy Oli's and Tom's unraveled past... As much as it is still in the dark and not all has been revelead yet but in upcoming chapters I will be dropping hints and reveleaing more of their past.

And as for Oli hitting Josh, I added that completely last minute and thought it would be a mistake cos you'll hate me but I'm glad I did cos it's spiced things up and people want more! Josh was completely convinced that Oli wouldn't hurt him intentionally and when oli did it's changed everything. Josh unknowingly likes to push Oli's boundaries and Oli's all over the place because he's so used to basically murdering people if they even dare glanced at him the wrong way but Josh is changing him slowly...

OH MY DAMN. Jesus. Ugh. I fucking can't. Okay so first of all, their mom. I'm so excited to get more Tom and Oli backstory. That's so heavy though! Poor lil guy. And it would explain their crazy! Like Dexter. Also the back handing whatttttt. In the wise words of the great philosopher Kendrick Lamar: "uh uh, fuck that." I literally went "what? No. Absolutely not" out loud in my room. Das some bull shit.

Also because of how josh is, every time he does anything slightly rebellious or reckless, I'm very excited. With most characters I'm like "no, you'll regret this, think of your future!" But because he's so sheltered and shit keeps happening to him now and he deserves none of it, decisions like wrecking a room and smoking all Oli's weed got me like "YAS bitch, drag him." lol anyway lovely to see an update! You're the greatest!

@ f50ShadesofFrackedUp
I like tragedies and happy endings, I'm undecided with how I will end this story though... We'll see nearer the end.

@ cloud_3
I actually don't care, and more people prefer happy endings. I'm just saying, if I were to write a sad one, this is how I would end it. But it's your story, and you may not like tragedies

@ f50ShadesofFrackedUp
I'm not sure about updating tomorrow lol I might let this chapter settle and let you all squirm haha I'm mean xD

Thanks for commenting Hun, I'm guessing you don't want to see them work things out after this huh?

You need to update again like, tomorrow. I wanna see what goes down, even though if they split up right now and never got back together, I wouldn't be too upset

@ GiveMeTheKEYS!
It was just that god damn chapter that was holding me back and making me feel so unmotivated! But it isn't a true chapter by me if there's no drama and I have drama planned for the next chapter to reveal a little about Oli and why Tom hates Josh so much...

Haha the next chapter might have you more concerned about them after I finish with them ;) you might probably hate me after it aswell so apologies in advance!

Thank you for the awesome feedback my lovely, great motivation as always! Hopefully I won't take too long to update the next chapter x

Ahh lovely. I took a little break from mibba and it was great to come back to some chapters to read!

I AM CONCERNED ABOUT THEM. Haha they seem so good when they're being cute but like its so sexual and we still know so little about Oli and they're not defining themselves and WERE LIVING IN GLASS HOUSES. So.

Josh is totally changing through this and you can hear it in the tone you write in and it's super cool. He's gotten so much more tolerant to these ridiculous situations Oli gets into, even though he's clearly not psyched about any of this gang nonsense. I also really like Jordan's character and want more! Lol thanks for the update chica!

@ GiveMeTheKEYS!
Haha I had to bring out sassy Josh eventually who's finally had enough of Oli always disappearing on him. You Can't expect nothing but drama from the both of them :p And don't worry, I'm slowly getting to unfolding Oli's story... Need to figure out how I'm going to make it happen though :/ I have a few ideas but let's see. Josh will start asking questions again...

Thank you again for commenting and your great feedback to this story, it gives me great motivation! :D x

Haha well they are just a mess. It is just one thing after another with these two. I'm so glad josh is finally comfortable to say what he wants though, I think it really helps with the relationship dynamic. I still see Oli as so mysterious though, it'd be cool to get a story or two out of him sometime soon, or maybe just an explanation about how the gang started. I love when they're good though, it warms my heart! Haha thank you for updating ya lovely lady!

@ f50ShadesofFrackedUp
So happy you liked it :)

You most likely are it's very quiet in here lately but thank you for commenting on all my stories it means a lot and keeps me motivated!! I'll try and update we're young and in love soon.