I Knew You Were Trouble - Comments

  • f50ShadesofFrackedUp

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    This chapter was epic.

    I also feel like the only person who comments now.
    March 29th, 2016 at 04:40am
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    @ f50ShadesofFrackedUp
    Thanks for your comment Hun, and I've been lucky enough to have the time to update regularly :)
    March 5th, 2016 at 04:20pm
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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    Omg your comment has made my day! I was feeling so unmotivated and lost writing this whole chapter and honestly thought it was rubbish... Your comment makes me want to cry with happiness :') thank you so much, I'm so happy you like it, it's such a relief!! LOL. Yeah I wanted Oli to kind of have 'I don't give a shit attitude' like, this is what I do with my life, take it or leave it Josh. Lol I'm glad you found it funny :) and thank you so much again for your love and support my lovely lady, it means so much <3
    March 5th, 2016 at 04:18pm
  • GiveMeTheKEYS!

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    Dude what the h are you talking about this is a "filler"?? These last 3 chapters have been doooope. We've had so much action and drama and I've loved it! Super rad. I am so into this story right now it's cray cray. Oli defending josh to all the other guys is sooo nice and their low-key bonding lately with all the gentle touches and quiet moments ❤️❤️❤️❤️ I'm a big fan. I was laughing out loud at josh "explaining" though. Like yeah I kill people whatever shut up. I trade drugs, what of it? Hahaha classic. Thanks for the update! Believe in yourself homie cuz I sure do!!!
    March 4th, 2016 at 11:44pm
  • f50ShadesofFrackedUp

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    I like when you update a lot since literally nobody else on my subsciptions do.
    February 27th, 2016 at 03:38am
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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    Yes, lots of new exciting things happening now! I've been holding back on the gang stuff for awhile but now it's time to let shit get real ;) I've already had a few ideas for the next chapter which I think all you guys will like.., not sure if poor Josh will tho...

    Thank you for commenting :)
    February 23rd, 2016 at 11:51am
  • GiveMeTheKEYS!

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    Ooooooooooooh I love this chapter. So much going on!! Starts all adorable and shit, then Oli gets all aggressive again (classic) and then all this new gang business! This is getting exciting. Poor fucking Josh though. <3 What a cutie. Psyched to see what goes down with Jordan.
    February 23rd, 2016 at 01:46am
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    @ fluffypoppy
    Hello new reader :) and thank you so much! Hopefully the next chapter will be updated sometime this week :3
    February 15th, 2016 at 05:55pm
  • fluffypoppy

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    omg this is so good! can't wait for the next update <3
    February 15th, 2016 at 04:58pm
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    @ Blackroseofthenight8
    Thanks Hun :)
    February 1st, 2016 at 08:44pm
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    @ Gem_Jar93
    He doesn't realise how caring he's being though...
    Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comment girlie :)
    February 1st, 2016 at 08:43pm
  • Gem_Jar93

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    Oil is so caring its super cite! Feelings are deffo developing though :)
    February 1st, 2016 at 04:38am
  • Gem_Jar93

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    Yay! I've been waif for an update! I'm glad they are talking... Okay, fucking again xD

    I'm pretty sure Oli has some sort of feelings towards lie Joshie :)
    January 21st, 2016 at 02:21pm
  • Blackroseofthenight8

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    Love love love!!!
    January 20th, 2016 at 11:23pm
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    That was an intense ending... I really hope Tom didn't mean it. His brother may have fucked up but to be honest, I'm pretty sure that's the last thing he needs to hear. That last chapter was intense, though. Really, really loved it! Looking forward to your next update!
    January 11th, 2016 at 06:54am
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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    Aw thanks Hun, your comment means a lot :) I have so much planned for this story and so much more drama to come too! (I'm trying to come out of my comfort zone and try something different) I'm currently sick ATM and back at work so I'm not sure when I'll next update. But thank you for you love and support for this story <3 xx
    January 4th, 2016 at 10:50am
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    @ GiveMeTheKEYS!
    Aw thanks Hun, your comment means a lot :) I have so much planned for this story and so much more drama to come too! (I'm trying to come out of my comfort zone and try something different) I'm currently sick ATM and back at work so I'm not sure when I'll next update. But thank your for you love and support for this story <3 xx
    January 4th, 2016 at 10:47am
  • GiveMeTheKEYS!

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    I really like how different this story is. It's not two perfect caring angels that will inevitably fall in love, yno? They have flaws and do dumb shit and you're not even sure if they'll work but they're entertaining anyway. Thanks for the update dude, it's lovely to see this story pop up in my subscriptions. I mean it stresses me out, but I like it. :P <3
    January 2nd, 2016 at 08:22pm
  • chvser

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    Omg my emotions are all over the place!!!!! I also hate dan with a burning passion Evil or Very Mad !!!!
    December 8th, 2015 at 11:54am
  • GiveMeTheKEYS!

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    Oh my gosh this story is a roller coaster. It's like with every paragraph I can't decide whether they're cute, or destructive, or if Oli's just a dick. Haha excellent story-telling. Poor Josh doesn't know which ways up and neither do I! They seemed so cute in the kitchen together and then that ending. :(
    December 6th, 2015 at 08:58pm