Sorry for commenting late on this chapter BUT sex. Yeah, sex. Hot sex. Most descriptive scene you've had so far, but it was also the hottest so yes hot damn. Also, fight fight fight fight
Yup alright making Alex cry eas the final straw. Fuck you, Max, fuck you and the horse you road in on. How dare you admit your "love" to him when he is in a happy relationship. Butthole.
Btw good chapter, I feel out of everyone we don't see Natasha much, it was nice getting a few moments of her.
I hate Max Can we have him miss his flight and never return? Thanks Also, you have nothing to worry about because everything is just great and makes perfect sense
Filler or not, it was nice seeing into Marissa and Zack's relationship. I love learning about the other characters. I'm personally rooting for a steamy makeout session between jack and alex on the eiffel tower, though
@ northshore ahh thank u i had been developing that part for a while tbh
@ runs_on_coffee i'm glad you liked it!!! and maybe we could do that! i don't really ever have a set sort of detail i want to work with, i always tend to just go with what i can produce at the time, which usually tends to be vague :/
I couldn't help but to smile and feel all soft when Jack described Alex. Such a sweet scene. As for smut, if it helps, I can always beta it for you? Unless you wanna keep the scenes more vague because it does suit the overall feel of the story. Unless you do want super detail, idk?
I'm not sure how to feel about this