Horseshoes and Hand Grenades - Comments

  • northshore

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    I gotta admit I expected more drama
    I'm not sure how to feel about this
    November 11th, 2016 at 02:11pm
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    @ northshore
    jack is perfectly happy with that too

    @ runs_on_coffee
    it's ok! i'm shit at updating so nothing rly matters lol!
    November 11th, 2016 at 09:29am
  • runs_on_coffee

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    Sorry for commenting late on this chapter BUT sex. Yeah, sex. Hot sex. Most descriptive scene you've had so far, but it was also the hottest so yes hot damn.
    Also, fight fight fight fight
    November 10th, 2016 at 05:22pm
  • northshore

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    I'm perfectly happy with you using sex to make me wait longer for Jack to murder Max
    October 28th, 2016 at 01:09pm
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    @ rosemary_298516
    thank you!!
    October 26th, 2016 at 10:12am
  • rosemary_298516

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    I just started reading this story a couple days ago and I finally caught up xD I love it soooo much xD
    October 22nd, 2016 at 08:44am
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    @ northshore
    i agree also

    @ runs_on_coffee
    thanks! i'm happy you enjoyed it, i'm trying to bring back the other characters more often
    October 19th, 2016 at 10:07am
  • runs_on_coffee

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    Yup alright making Alex cry eas the final straw. Fuck you, Max, fuck you and the horse you road in on. How dare you admit your "love" to him when he is in a happy relationship. Butthole.

    Btw good chapter, I feel out of everyone we don't see Natasha much, it was nice getting a few moments of her.
    October 13th, 2016 at 05:41pm
  • runs_on_coffee

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    @ northshore
    I FULLY AGREE
    October 13th, 2016 at 05:39pm
  • northshore

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    KICK ASS KICK ASS KICK ASS!!
    October 13th, 2016 at 03:26pm
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    @ w4nderer
    he has some other plans

    @ northshore
    thank you!! sadly max is staying

    @ runs_on_coffee
    i agree! i kind of want to start delving into his thoughts, though, so he doesn't seem like such an antagonist.
    October 9th, 2016 at 08:40pm
  • runs_on_coffee

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    So I thought Max was slowly getting a bit better, but no. The whole asking Alex to room with him thing is so not cool. Jack you protect your boy.

    Also, I am perfectly fine waiting for a Marissa and Zack side story.
    October 9th, 2016 at 07:05pm
  • northshore

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    I hate Max
    Can we have him miss his flight and never return? Thanks
    Also, you have nothing to worry about because everything is just great and makes perfect sense
    October 9th, 2016 at 11:21am
  • w4nderer

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    can we just throw max's little devious ass out of the plane and be done w it please i can't deal with him leave jalex alone
    October 9th, 2016 at 10:15am
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    @ northshore
    max is gonna go nuts tbh

    @ runs_on_coffee
    i'm trying to get more into marissa and zack but i feel like i have to deal with a little jalex problem first..
    October 9th, 2016 at 01:06am
  • runs_on_coffee

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    Filler or not, it was nice seeing into Marissa and Zack's relationship. I love learning about the other characters. I'm personally rooting for a steamy makeout session between jack and alex on the eiffel tower, though
    September 29th, 2016 at 11:22pm
  • northshore

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    It's a very very cute filler, I enjoyed it :)
    Can't wait to see what else is gonna happen with Max though, he's been super quiet lately lol
    September 29th, 2016 at 01:23pm
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    @ northshore
    ahh thank u i had been developing that part for a while tbh

    @ runs_on_coffee
    i'm glad you liked it!!! and maybe we could do that! i don't really ever have a set sort of detail i want to work with, i always tend to just go with what i can produce at the time, which usually tends to be vague :/
    September 29th, 2016 at 11:09am
  • runs_on_coffee

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    I couldn't help but to smile and feel all soft when Jack described Alex. Such a sweet scene.
    As for smut, if it helps, I can always beta it for you? Unless you wanna keep the scenes more vague because it does suit the overall feel of the story. Unless you do want super detail, idk?
    September 20th, 2016 at 04:28pm
  • northshore

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    I love this
    God do I love this
    It's so serene, so scenic, so perfectly well written and detailed
    September 20th, 2016 at 01:08pm