September 20th, 2016 at 11:19am
Horseshoes and Hand Grenades - Comments
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so cute!!!September 19th, 2016 at 03:21pm
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@ police911
And please, lingerie Alex is my life.September 17th, 2016 at 06:26pm -
/upload it now/ like, I think Alex could top. It's nice, fresh, having a versatile relationship. Ya know? Like having a set role in sex always made me a little, like, idk? Switch it up. I'm excited.September 17th, 2016 at 06:22pm
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Gimme the new chapter and gimme it nowwwwwwSeptember 17th, 2016 at 01:11pm
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@ northshore
interesting points! thank you for your feedback! i'm still so interested in why people are pitting jack and max against each other, though. obviously i get it because i'd be doing the same thing as a reader, but it's funny to think about. from alex's point of view, which is the majority of the story, he only compares them in a positive sort of way, and still shows favour toward jack. the only negative light being shed on max is from jack's point of view. no idea why i'm so confused by this when its my own story, but it's funny to think about.
@ runs_on_coffee
jalex purism is ME !!!! i get you. thanks for the feedback, i think i'm definitely going to try to develop the other characters more. as for alex in lingerie, maybe in the future. i think he's definitely got that in him, but he's still a huge baby rn to me tbhSeptember 17th, 2016 at 12:49pm -
I don't know, honestly, I'm a Jalex purist, and after the who shabang with Sam, I feel as though I can't trust Max. Like, he could end up becoming super great friends with them, but I'll still have mistrust because Jalex babies and whatnot. Maybe he'll add some great drama/plot twists in the story, though. He's just a complex character to me. And definitely, build up them relationships. With Natasha, too! I love when stories give focus to side characters, because it builds up the universe the live in, ya know? Makes it seem like less of a small window and more open, ya know what I mean? Also, please say the birthday gift is something sexual because if Alex appears in lingerie for Jack I might just die.September 7th, 2016 at 07:10am
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Well, if it were up to me, I would have shipped Max off long ago so making him a long term friend is absolutely against everything I stand for. I don't know if Max has any "serious" intentions with Alex, it seems more like a puppy love kind of thing to me, although I'm sure he wouldn't mind getting laid. As for Alex, as you already pointed out, I think he knows but doesn't like seeing Max that way so he chooses to ignore the advances coming from the other boy. He seems like he's into him just a tiny bit or maybe into someone besides Jack trying to win him over, I can't really put a finger on that yet. I think more Marissa and Zack would be cute, as would be Rian and Cass. I would love for Max and Jack to actually really confront each other and have this huge fallout about who's better for Alex and why to the point where both end up giving each other nasty glares from afar and such, that would be fun! As always, I'm super excited that you updated, you definitely made my day!September 6th, 2016 at 11:21am
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@ police911
#jealousjackAugust 31st, 2016 at 08:01pm -
Yesssss guuuuurlAugust 31st, 2016 at 02:25pm
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@ runs_on_coffee
why not :^(
@ northshore
i'm working on the next one RNAugust 31st, 2016 at 08:42am -
I need moooooreAugust 25th, 2016 at 02:40am
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Alex you are supposed to not like Max you buttAugust 25th, 2016 at 12:47am
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Yeah that's more than enough lolAugust 13th, 2016 at 03:27pm
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@ runs_on_coffee
as usual
@ northshore
but they haven't done anything!! well, not really. alex was a bit of a jerk but that's really itAugust 12th, 2016 at 01:23pm -
I don't think you understand how much this upsets me
I really wish I could smack Alex and Max
AssholesAugust 12th, 2016 at 08:06am -
God damMIT MAX GAHAugust 11th, 2016 at 09:09pm
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@ runs_on_coffee
me too lol
@ northshore
same
@ scre4mtobeh3ard
mhm
@ ellzbellz2000
it will!!August 8th, 2016 at 09:49pm -
Last happy chapter?! This better have a happy ending!! :'''''(((August 6th, 2016 at 03:47pm
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I have a feeling something is gonna happenAugust 4th, 2016 at 03:20am
it's up!
@ runs_on_coffee
i agree!! it will happen for them eventually :^)
@ Katiemacx14
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