Deep Space - Comments

from the summary to the layout, this is just captivating on all fronts of life. half the time i'm just staring @ the layout drooling all over my keyboard bc it so fits your story, wtf. it's amazing, kudos on the maker.

the way you write from this first p.o.v i just goddamn magnificent. i've never really read something that's executed so well, so i'm kind of reeling rn bc i'm trying to process the beauty of all these words meshing together on my screen. you have such an eloquent way w/ words that i feel like i'm one of the people circling her, making her feel ten times more uncomfortable than she already is, & feeling the aura of uncertainty wafting from around her. it's absolutely brilliant & @ this point, i'm just repeating myself, but only bc i'm @ a loss for words.

This is really well written and leaves the reader with a sense of wonder in how you will continue, I really love your writing style and everything is fluid as you read :)

I'm definitely intrigued by this and I think you have an interesting concept going on here. I'm curious to see where you're going to take this.

This is probably the most perfect prologue I've ever read. It's short, it's descriptive, it sounds beautiful in my mind's ears. The emotion of anxiousness comes to me and I wonder more about how the character speaking feels, what happens to them. Your character page is also stunning, and I think the descriptions are fantastic; it makes me hope that every reader looks at that page. Cannot wait for more of this!

This is some wonderful writing. I am absolutely intrigued. I'm sure we're going to find out who this person is and what obstacles they might face when they launch but at the moment, just this prologue makes me feel like some serious shit is gonna go down later on, to put it bluntly XD. I love this, like, each word just kept pulling me in and making me want to read more. I do hope you continue.