Voyager - Comments

I like how this chapter mainly focused on time and how you used time to kind of represent her life. I think the length of this was perfect and you learned a lot about the character already, enough about her past and her future to keep the reader intrigued.

I like how this chapter mainly focused on time and how you used time to kind of represent her life. I think the length of this was perfect and you learned a lot about the character already, enough about her past and her future to keep the reader intrigued.

this will be great. i know it

this will be great. i know it

I agree 100% with the dalliance. This is going to be epic.

YAS PLEASE.
THIS IS GOING TO BE RAD.