Zero Gravity - Comments

I don't usually read NextGen but this seems like it's going to be amazing. I absolutely love how she's one of the only people that isn't wrapped around his finger. I can't wait to see where this goes. Subscribed!

I love your layout, and I love what you have so far! I was confused with your summary though because you went from "me" to "he" and the whole summary was about James? I think? I'm not entirely sure. I love the GIFs you have chosen, though!

I swear she’d create and carry trading cards for every one of his hair phases if it didn’t make her seem loony. Me about boys honestly. I love how this story so relateable! The rest of Cecily's description is great. It makes me feel better about all the people I know who get off with things because of their beauty.

I also like how it doesn't really seem that Posey and James are close or anything, yet he seems to know that she does well in exams. It's like he pays attention to her. Like a foreshadowing of what's coming. Also 87.8% is so precise, I love it. Somehow it doesn't even matter that this is next gen - it feels so natural to read it, and yet somehow it still feels disconnected from the HP world, like it's your own. Definitely going to sub to this~

One odd to point out error: divination should be capital because it's the name of the course. quidditch is also capital, oddly enough, which is likely to do with the origin of the sport's name.

Also: “So, you’re Miles friend, right?” Miles should be Miles' much like if it was Posey in question it would say Posey's. (Only no extra 'S' apparently.)

oMG YES KATIE IM SO READY FOR THIS. I'M ACTUALLY A HUGE SUCKER FOR JSP STORIES AND THIS LOOKS SO GOOD.

I'm not much for fan-fiction but I will have to make an exception for this!
Can't wait for the start!