July 17th, 2015 at 04:16pm
@ LordOfTheThunderCats
I usually put the thoughts in italics and I planned on fixing that today because I was in a rush to post this last night and I wasn't feeling to great. As for the dialogue, I think if it's not a constant back and forth thing then it shouldn't be on its own new paragraph ya feel ???? Idk I hope I'm making sense
Thank you for your feedback though !!