Death Would Have Been Easier - Comments

@ mrsmshadz
Characters are characters, not the real person. The character Brian is being portrayed as a rude and harsh character. My bad for using the wrong term, it'll be fixed when I do final edits. That also goes for how Zacky knows where she lives. The character Harley has multiple nicknames, Harls being one of them. I will not change or try to find a new nickname for her. It is pleases you, then by all means, call her 'hurls'. You can get a few nicknames out of Harley, and I quite like the two that I've chosen for her.

@ mrsmshadz
Characters are characters, not the real person. The character Brian is being portrayed as a rude and harsh character. My bad for using the wrong term, it'll be fixed when I do final edits. That also goes for how Zacky knows where she lives. The character Harley has multiple nicknames, Harls being one of them. I will not change or try to find a new nickname for her. It is pleases you, then by all means, call her 'hurls'. You can get a few nicknames out of Harley, and I quite like the two that I've chosen for her.

Oh and you have to come up with a better nickname than Harls lmao I wanna say hurls everytime I see it. Lee was better. My daughter's name is Harley but she doesn't have a nickname. Can't really get one from that name.

How does Zaky know where she lives? She didn't mention it. And why would Brian say such harsh words. Maybe a teenage Brian would say that but not a grown man.

First chapter is good. A lil confusing. Also I thought they were at bar not a coffee shop? A barista works at coffee shop a bartender works at a bar.

OoOo Matt is not a happy camper!!! Love the update and can't wait to read more!!

I'm really intrigued to find out how this is going to play out. I hope it'll have a happy ending though. Please update again soon xxx

I like it, and can't wait to see how this plays out!