The Silver Three - Comments

  • salvatore.

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    "Age has crept in my bones and made peace with my marrow."
    In. Cred. I. Ble.
    Your writing is fabulous.
    I can't wait to see where this will go from here.
    Gosh. I just love this.
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    October 24th, 2015 at 09:18am
  • gooney2

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    This is great really well written I can't wait for more!
    October 21st, 2015 at 07:43pm
  • salvatore.

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    This deserves so much recognition. Excellent writing, excellent point of view. I love Blackburn so. damn. much. I can't wait for longer chapters. I read this all at once and immediately longed for more.
    Please continue. Of course at your own pace. But... Just know I'm waiting as patiently as possible.
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    October 15th, 2015 at 11:30pm
  • BeachxGirlx19

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    My ONE and only problem is that your chapters are so damn short but they're so damn good at the same time! I love how you flipped things around and Draco isn't all sappy over a Gryffindor. Please please PLEASE continue!!
    September 5th, 2015 at 06:14am
  • Juno

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    Soooooo good. I'm glad you decided to do this
    September 2nd, 2015 at 06:24am
  • writhing

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    As decay said, Blaise is super fine. Wink

    But seriously, this story is already awesome. I think the first chapter sets up the protagonist nicely - the concise sentences make me believe that a child is the narrator, and I think you've managed to capture the type of personality and voice the child of a Death Eater would have. It's interesting and somewhat unsettling that the color of the train reminds her of blood. That small observation reveals a lot about her character and the situations she must experience to think that way.

    All in all, I'm excited and subscribing!
    August 4th, 2015 at 02:46am
  • iron and wine.

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    im so ready for this omg
    August 3rd, 2015 at 06:09am
  • raja sahara

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    ugh double Facepalm
    July 31st, 2015 at 07:07am
  • raja sahara

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    holy moly I'm so into this and it hasn't even started
    first of all, idk why I never paid attention to Blaise Zabini in the movies because he's fine af
    and lil Draco makes me giggle every time tehe
    can't wait till you start this!!!!!
    July 31st, 2015 at 07:06am