Murphy's Law - Comments

That was some pretty intense sex right there. Like whoa, so hot! Daryl afterwards had me cheesing so hard. It's endearing how awkward and insecure he is. Of course he had to turn back into his dickhead self, though. Wahh, I thought they were finally making progress. Shane is just, ugh! He's so gross.

OMG!!!! ugh Daryl needs to stop acting like a little bitch. But I loved this chapter!!

aawe man it totally started off with puppies, sunshine and unicorns shooting rainbows out of their butts and ended with dementors sucking the fun outta everything...

damn Shane being out in the hall f*cking everything up.....
Daryl is one frustrating man.. that's for sure..
but damn! it was hotter than the sun there for a minute or two

What in the blue balls hell just happened like incredible sex and then bam Shane fucking ruins it

Just wait until you read this next one

@ helena_88

well.... with a drunk daryl and harper wearing next to nothing......

yeah harper, why you go and kiss two guys, huh?? explain that one to a drunk redneck
gaah! shane!! you butthead!!
carl.. way to go little dude

Oh Daryl smh

So happy to see you updated! I love This! Can't wait for more!

Well at least they are safe.....but what is going to happen with Daryl and Harper

a week? dude that's nothing hell, i'm shit at updating my own stories and some that i'm subs- to can take up to a year until there's a new chapter to read

hmm.. well.. I think that Daryl is acting the only way he knows how.. I think he's shocked at how he acted down at the quarry(?) and prob. half scared of what she'll say about it and what the others would say if they knew.. but then again, it's Daryl, ya never know what he thinks

great chapter

Love it!!!!

Hope you update soon!

Sophia hugging him was freaking adorable! Something about a rough, abrasive man being hugged by a little, innocent person makes my heart smile. The kiss was hot, and I was all for going further, but then Shane had to ruin it. I think he's really going to avoid her now, and be an even bigger dick.

honestly I want them to go back to camp and hook up, a reaaaally good hook up, too. and then the next morning he's less of an ass to her but still an ass and then like a week Or so after they hook up again but maybe this time it's just like hand/mouth stuff and then he's still an ass and then they don't hook up again until the cdc

okay so the whole Sophia hugging Daryl thing was totally super adorable! while reading it I sat here hoping that she'd hug him, like she hugged Harper, and she did! Yay! She even threw in a kiss to his cheek

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah She got him in the trap!! She really knows how to get him to come around when she wants something.. Though the pretend drowning was a liiiitlte bit mean
Wham-Bham! Now THAT'S A FIRST KISS!
Bah, and Shane coming down there messing things up
I bet, now that Daryl got time to cool off, he's probably going to be mad at her (as usual) in the beginning, prob. not gonna ''loosen'' up again until he's drunk at the CDC
Though, anything can happen, and I LOVE that

I am glad you started reading and like it. Thank you for such a nice comment and hope you like the next chapter! I have a lot planned

@ InLoveWithMyLife.

@ jessegdixon
weeeell, now I kinda just wanna go lay in bed and cry...
Norman Reedus and Sebastian Stan.... Just two of the most gorgeous men on the planet- who also seem like such goofy guys irl..
I reeeaally hope you'll have an super-epic time when you meet them

I really loved that moment too. I kinda saw it happening the way it did in season two between him and Carol when she kissed him on the cheek for going on the search for Sophia.

@ Beckwah123

I'm glad you liked the stuff with the old woman and the camera. I really loved writing that. Thank you for such a sweet comment.

@ loveismyweapon.

Glad you liked the chapter lol It's funny you metioned Bucky I get to meet him too haha

@ helena_88

Just binged this and I love it! I really like how you're mixing it up, but still following the plot of the show. I love their interactions and I really, really liked the retirement home and Felipe's grandmother! It was so sweet and original!