Murphy's Law - Comments

I feel like chapter 4 felt very genuinely Daryl, if that makes sense. Like I can really picture season one Daryl acting that way if he got caught staring/knew that he was being stared at.
I'm really excited to see where this story goes from here!

Thank you for your comments guys it means the world <3 You are the first three!
@ loveismyweapon.
@ Holden Caulfield.

Don't worry more coming on Monday!

@ Beckwah123

That is why I love writing for Harper, she gets to put a lot of people in their places. There is definitely more of that in store. I've wrote five chapters ahead so I don't get behind and she definitely stands her own ground.

I like it so far! She's putting him in his place.

I definitely need more of this story.

I'm really liking this story so far!