The Night Shades. - Comments

  • Meronean

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    Wonder who attacked her village? Hoping for more chapters soon. :)
    December 21st, 2015 at 04:38am
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    Well mister husky is very concerned for her comfort. I wonder what he wants her for?
    November 8th, 2015 at 05:53am
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    So the Night Shades are shape shifters? I guess I wasn't expecting that. I was sort of thinking something more alien.
    That's cool though!
    Excited to read more. The only thing that struck me as a little off was Mr. Husky wearing jeans. How advanced are these people?
    November 3rd, 2015 at 08:35pm
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    I just read the first chapter. How am I the first comment? God dang silent readers.
    First off, love the vibe. Winter, cape, walking through the woods. What's not to love?
    Spotted a couple small typos. Nothing earth shattering or really that distracting.
    My initial thoughts about the story...
    This kind of feels the the movie, The Village.
    I'm cool with that. I love that movie.
    I'm eager to read more and delve deeper into this tale though.Dance
    November 3rd, 2015 at 06:07am