So the Night Shades are shape shifters? I guess I wasn't expecting that. I was sort of thinking something more alien. That's cool though! Excited to read more. The only thing that struck me as a little off was Mr. Husky wearing jeans. How advanced are these people?
I just read the first chapter. How am I the first comment? God dang silent readers. First off, love the vibe. Winter, cape, walking through the woods. What's not to love? Spotted a couple small typos. Nothing earth shattering or really that distracting. My initial thoughts about the story... This kind of feels the the movie, The Village. I'm cool with that. I love that movie. I'm eager to read more and delve deeper into this tale though.