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  • Desert Moon

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    @ Ysabelly
    I completely understand. Excited to finally catch up with my stories on here! :D
    December 22nd, 2016 at 04:27pm
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    @ green2envy
    Hehe thanks! Mr. Green

    Unfortunately, Dante's killer/s made it out of the city, but who knows, they might appear in later chapters (hint, hint) Wink
    December 20th, 2016 at 03:27pm
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    Ahh love it!!! Can't wait to see the chaos that Mara will unleash when she finds Dante's killer.
    December 16th, 2016 at 07:06pm
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    @ Rubicon.
    I have actually toyed around with the idea of Mara encountering Jack during the Season 3 timeline, but it wouldn't be consistent with her old self, especially since she has the capability to kill him, so she would have tracked him down and get her revenge as soon as the opportunity presented itself.

    So sorry for the late reply, these past couple of months have been quite hectic Sad
    December 16th, 2016 at 05:58pm
  • Desert Moon

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    @ Ysabelly
    Of course! I thought there was. xD It would be hysterical to me if Jack actually survived and met up with her again. xD I can picture Jack crapping himself in fear. Lmao. Yay I'm excited!
    October 20th, 2016 at 04:16am
  • Ysabelly

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    @ Rubicon.
    Thanks! Glad to know that people are still reading this story Mr. Green

    So far, there's no chapter that details Mara's revenge, mainly because in the flashbacks, she's still somewhat learning the ropes and evolving into the cold, calculated killer we all know and love, but when she does get her revenge on Jack, you can bet that it will make the previous torture chapters look like child's play Wink
    October 19th, 2016 at 05:38pm
  • Desert Moon

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    I forgot if there was a detailed chapter on Mara's revenge on her ex and one on what happened to him after the outbreak.

    Awesome update! College is kicking my ass as well lol. xD
    October 19th, 2016 at 04:53am
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    @ loveismyweapon.
    Thank you!
    When I first started writing this fic, I wanted to create a character who could have a love/hate relationship with Daryl because I thought it would be interesting Mr. Green
    June 24th, 2016 at 07:14am
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    I really like this so far! Mara's very unique to all of the other love interests I've seen with Daryl, and I really like that.
    I can't wait to read more!
    June 23rd, 2016 at 11:04pm
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    @ bob nathaniel bryar
    Thank you so much!
    I'm really glad you love the story Mr. Green
    June 17th, 2016 at 02:36am
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    Oooh! I am in love with this story! Definitely subscribing! So so good!
    June 17th, 2016 at 02:01am
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    @ illehigh
    Thank you!! So glad you enjoy this story Mr. Green
    I'm currently working on the next chapter; hopefully, it'll be up by the end of the week!
    June 14th, 2016 at 07:03pm
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    post the next chapter already!!!
    June 14th, 2016 at 12:15pm
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    Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy this is sooooo good!!!! 10/10 recommend!!!!
    June 14th, 2016 at 12:15pm
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    @ Ysabelly
    OH HELL YES!!!! :D
    June 8th, 2016 at 08:54am
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    @ Rubicon.
    Thank you Mr. Green
    Nope, that part hasn't been written yet, so you didn't miss it :) It will appear in the flashback sequences eventually.
    But don't worry, Mara always gets her revenge Wink
    June 8th, 2016 at 03:43am
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    @ helena_88
    Thank you!
    I'm actually having a lot of fun building up her relationship with Daryl - even if it's a little bit slow tehe
    Oh, wow, I didn't realize that you changed your name! I love it XD
    June 8th, 2016 at 03:38am
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    Was there a chapter where Mara went after Jack? I dont remember that one. Anyway, great update!!! :D
    June 8th, 2016 at 01:01am
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    hah, she made Daryl chuckle!! awesome! XD
    which in turn wasn't good for her... tehe

    great chapter as usual! Cute
    June 7th, 2016 at 10:38pm
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    @ acid_rain88
    you can rest assured that Mara will remain a hardened badass Wink but yes, having her develop a heart is a key part in her character development.
    i really enjoyed writing the lake scene hahaha Mr. Green it'll be really important as she develops her relationship with Daryl, and honestly, how can anyone not drool over those arms??? tehe

    and i'm so glad you picked up on the thought part! it'll be really important in the next chapter Wink
    May 10th, 2016 at 05:38am