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dude. love it!
yay u finally updated.

I'm not even going to try to write a really detailed comment, because tbh commenting on long chaptered stories intimidates me sometimes.

What I like the most about this story are the character relationships. There's a really clear loyalty between Gerard, Frank and Quinn. And even though there's tension between Gerard and Mikey because of their past, it seems to be slowly easing the more time they spend with each other...and I guess Mikey's beginning to realise that Gerard didn't intend to abandon him at all.

And I like that Frank and Gerard are confused about their feelings (well, Gerard is at least). It adds some more realism to it, because Gerard's been looking after Frank and Quinn, so maybe he feels that he plays the role of elder brother or parent to Frank, and he's not sure how to take Frank's interest in him and his own feelings. :think:

I like it so far.

Awesome update, I loved it.

hot update

aw you updated, and if you want a cure for writers block you just had to ask me or somebody who spends half of there day thinking of stupid things...

just like...do something random...put yourself in Frank or gerards shoes in you story and then BAMB! you might have an idea :D

TheGhost...ofME!:

-Reading other Ferard's generally helps me, a little bit. I have some on one I haven't yet posted, and I used Lightening Zap's story The List to help me.
-You could also read random books/stories that have nothing to do with the story its self.
-Or just taking a break.
-Or even listening to music, sometimes helps me.

That helps fight it off, for me, anyway.
Btw, Awesome update, too! xD

Awww ILY :arms:

Yay! They are officially together!!
Thanks for updating. It was great to come home from work and read your update.

Sadly, Writer's Block is one of those almost incurable diseases, right up there with cancer and the common cold. So, I've no advice for you.

Great update, I love the ending especially. :]
More soon??

-Reading other Ferard's generally helps me, a little bit. I have some on one I haven't yet posted, and I used Lightening Zap's story The List to help me.
-You could also read random books/stories that have nothing to do with the story its self.
-Or just taking a break.
-Or even listening to music, sometimes helps me.

That helps fight it off, for me, anyway.
Btw, Awesome update, too! xD

shveet update...update soon!

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Awesome update! :XD

Awesome update I loved it. I hate Gerard's mom though.

PAGE CLAIM! I call it: I am salty from the beach.

Oooh, we finally found out a bit of the past!
But still not all of it :XD Like what led to his mother asking him to pick between family and Frank :XD

Great work!
Thanks for updating :D

I'm... extremely confused. What exactly happened in the past with Frank and Gerard? Like... why did Gerard leave home? And why did Frank need Gerard's help?

Yaaay!
All these updates [meaning your other stories too] are making me squee. In the best way possible.
Great update! You are a lovely writer, you know that?
More soon?? =D

poor boys

Omg, i've just spent two hours or so reading this awesome story!
i love it sooo much
update soon :)

Aww wow! I love this story! Poor Frankie, so much confusion swimming through their minds, i hope all works out for the better :]

In every chapter that goes by, I just want to use my god-hand and take Frank and Gerard and mesh them into one.
THAT is how badly I want them to get together.
This story's great, by the way, as is many of your fictional writings ;)