Blush. - Comments

  • Yay :} That was sweet.
    And btw, I don't think you mentioned their pasts or why G left home. No, wait, I think you mentioned a bit, when G first met Frank I think.
    xD
    October 11th, 2008 at 11:22pm
  • Awesome update, and from what I can remember no you didn't.
    October 8th, 2008 at 07:10pm
  • Lightning Zap:
    I don't remember you writing anything about their pasts. I've been wondering what all their pasts entail actually. And how they all met.

    Awesome update. There was some frerardness :D Yay!
    Good, good. You're not meant to know about their pasts yet. xD
    October 8th, 2008 at 01:18pm
  • I don't remember you writing anything about their pasts. I've been wondering what all their pasts entail actually. And how they all met.

    Awesome update. There was some frerardness :D Yay!
    October 8th, 2008 at 09:28am
  • Casey Calvert.:
    The ending was a dorable.

    And I may have missed it, but I don't think you've told us anything about their pasts...
    Thanks for letting me know. xD
    And I thought you guys deserved some cuteness.
    :cute:
    October 8th, 2008 at 06:52am
  • The ending was a dorable.

    And I may have missed it, but I don't think you've told us anything about their pasts...
    October 8th, 2008 at 06:49am
  • Oh man, what's up with Frank?
    Cool story.
    October 6th, 2008 at 11:21pm
  • Lightning Zap:
    Ooh. This is very interesting.
    Although I know why frank's like that... he's on his period isn't he??
    Anyways, cant' wait to see what part two entails.
    *chuckles* Yeah, I think Frank's on his period too.
    Anyway..
    MORE PLEASE ! xD
    October 6th, 2008 at 06:49pm
  • Ooh. This is very interesting.
    Although I know why frank's like that... he's on his period isn't he??
    Anyways, cant' wait to see what part two entails.
    October 6th, 2008 at 01:28pm
  • Awesome update.
    September 24th, 2008 at 10:08pm
  • Lightning Zap:
    Lol, Quinn is a sneaky fucker with the way he 'bumped' into Dan.
    Amen to that :-) Mikey's random dinner invitation made me go "ooh" but I think the thing that has me most interested was Frank's reaction to Mikey's dinner invitation.
    I'd have thought Frankie would have been at least a little happy for Gerard, but...hmm it's got me really interested, as if I wasn't already. :-)
    Beautifully written as always Kat, you have such a way with words.
    September 21st, 2008 at 02:47am
  • Oooh I wonder what Mikey wants to say.
    Damn, I wish Frank could just be all over Gerard again :XD Looking forward to that happening again.
    Lol, Quinn is a sneaky fucker with the way he 'bumped' into Dan.
    Can't wait for more of this wonderful story **runs off to read the new story**.
    September 20th, 2008 at 02:59pm
  • I haven’t read the last two chapters, so I’m writing you a big lovely comment. It’s so big in fact, that I’m writing it in a word document so that I can remember everything I want to say.

    Chapter Fourteen.

    “Personally, I think we’re a family. So, in answer, we’re a weird little family,” I answered, smiling a little at the prospect of being part of a family again.

    That made me smile too. Gerard seriously needs to be loved by someone. But it also made me really sad, because he doesn’t feel like he’s a part of one.

    After finally locating a pair of boxers, I threw them on and relaxed; no one could walk in on me now. I dressed quickly, hoping to get out of the house before Frank realised that I was alone.

    I wasn’t fast enough.


    Oh...what an absolute shame...Bummer. :shifty But I actually thought when I read the first few words, that Frank might walk in on Gerard...that would’ve been a shame. :shifty

    Chapter Fifteen.

    My thoughts wandered across plains of uncertain confusion, every now and again thinking of my Mum who had disowned me when I left. That hurt, but it was something I was now used to living with; my whole family had practically disowned me anyway.

    That made me really go aww, but not in that cute mushy way, as in the I want to tackle hug Gerard so badly because he’s sad aww. He has Quinn and Frank though, they’ve never really left him, they seem more like his family to me than his actual family.

    His small smile turned into a wide grin. Crawling over to me, he positioned me so I was leaning back a little, caught under his arms. He smiled at me and then leaned down and began kissing and nipping the skin under my ear lightly. Lost in the feeling of his lips against my neck, I had to hold back a small moan of satisfaction.

    That was extremely surprising. When he said he wanted to talk about Quinn I thought he was going to say that he likes him. Am I right in thinking that these two will be together soon? Hmmm? ;;P

    But Kat, this is one of my favourite stories on mibba...not just ‘cause you wrote it, but there’s something about this story that intrigues me beyond belief. Even though you’ve told me what I’ve already wanted to know, there’s so much that I still want to know. It’s actually killing me not knowing what’s going to happen in this story, I can’t predict exactly what’s going to happen. Usually with a story that I really like, I have high expectations for the story and sometimes the updates let me down. But this story has never done that, you are an amazing author and you have such a way with words. I should probably sum this up before I going on a rambling rampage about this story, because I know I will. I forgot how much I loved this story when you weren’t updating, and now that I have it back, I can feel that curiosity wash all over me again.

    Well done, mate.
    :cute:
    September 8th, 2008 at 08:33am
  • very good update=D
    September 8th, 2008 at 01:58am
  • Yay! I loved this update!!! It was so awesome. I'm glad Gerard is succumbing to Frank and I hope he doesn't have any second thoughts, cause the way that scene ended, it was very hot :)
    I was gonna read this after work, but decided to read it before work :D
    September 7th, 2008 at 10:00pm
  • That was the best chapter yet! :XD
    Well... maybe.
    Amazing update. It couldn't have been better.
    September 7th, 2008 at 06:33pm
  • aww, yay!
    that was cuuute. but i feel kinda sorry for quinn, he's all left out...
    ahwell. xD
    great update!

    susie x
    September 7th, 2008 at 02:06pm
  • JessicaRIOT:
    Yay! Gerard and Frank finally get some action ^_^
    I loved the update, I know how it feels to be banned by your parents LOL
    I hope you can update again soon :)
    Yeah, I got off on good behaviour. :tehe:
    Yesh, I shall update soon my dear. But I'm working on my other two stories as well as a new one now too. xD
    September 7th, 2008 at 06:09am
  • Yay! Gerard and Frank finally get some action ^_^
    I loved the update, I know how it feels to be banned by your parents LOL
    I hope you can update again soon :)
    September 7th, 2008 at 05:29am
  • Hey guys. I will be unable to do anything until 17th September as I've been banned from the internet. Big argument with parentals.
    August 21st, 2008 at 09:23am