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  • Lightning Zap

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    Dude- It's Vonni.:
    So...What the hell is a washing line?

    Yes, I'm aware I'm a moron...

    As for theories... I've got none. You've managed to stump me on that one...
    A washing line is something you hang your clothes on to make them dry. Another word for it is a clothes line :D
    June 27th, 2008 at 11:53pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    :o I thought everyone in the world had rotating clothes lines... lol. I've been Australianized way too much. :XD
    That was awesome how James was Aussie.
    That was a great update and I am very much looking forward to more.

    P.S - I think rotating clothes lines are fun to swing on :D
    June 27th, 2008 at 11:52pm
  • nope.

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    So...What the hell is a washing line?

    Yes, I'm aware I'm a moron...

    As for theories... I've got none. You've managed to stump me on that one...
    June 27th, 2008 at 12:38pm
  • kryptonite.

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    Your story is so warm and fuzzy, it made me feel better. (:
    But Gerard asking about our washing lines? I expected him to ask if we rode to school on kangaroo's or something.

    “No, come on. What is it?” he pressed.

    “It’s just that I hate Starbuck’s coffee with a passion,” I mumbled, jumping when James’s hand shot to his mouth in one quick movement.

    THANK YOU for the non cliche answer.
    Just an awesome update all round.
    June 27th, 2008 at 11:06am
  • Talion

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    Wow. This is the first frerard in a while that I really liked.
    I was so dissapointed when I finally reached chapter eight, because then there wasn't anything else to read. :XD
    Frank's upset, Quinn's pissed and Gerard's probably both.
    You've made them really interesting characters.
    Not everything's all ... layed out with them.
    Gerard's 'past' is pretty interesting, too.
    Poor Frank, he probably heard Gerard say he didn't like him. (Which is a lie!)
    I can't wait for Mikey to come into the scenes, just to see what he does.
    Please update soon? It might kill me if you take to long. ;)
    June 25th, 2008 at 09:14am
  • kryptonite.

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    Not happy with the update?
    What the poo Kat? It was great. Seriously.
    I loved it.
    June 24th, 2008 at 09:07am
  • Lightning Zap

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    That was a great update. You might not be happy with it, but I sure was :D
    June 24th, 2008 at 01:55am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awesome update.
    June 23rd, 2008 at 07:44pm
  • nope.

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    Whoa, what's gottin into Quinn?

    And why is Frank crying? I don't want Frank to be sad. =[
    June 23rd, 2008 at 07:27pm
  • JessicaRIOT.

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    I loved the update!
    I wonder why Quinn is so worked up about Gerard and Frank. Does he like Gerard?
    Hmm, I'll be thinking about that until the next time you can update =]
    <3333333333
    June 23rd, 2008 at 05:38pm
  • sexualfrustration

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    It's good.
    =]

    More?

    *subscribes*
    June 23rd, 2008 at 04:27pm
  • Smashed Pumpkin.

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    I love this story i really wanted it to carry on and on but then it ended and i was like NOOO! please update soon, i think Frankie is having a f problems with himself about mayb, crushing on Gerard...

    UPDATE!!!!
    June 22nd, 2008 at 06:19pm
  • nope.

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    This story is adorable in a weird way.

    I love it.

    Update soon =]
    June 22nd, 2008 at 01:53am
  • yourverity

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    awsome story!!! :)

    edit: PAGE CLAIMAGE!!! Dance
    i shall call it Snuggles
    June 20th, 2008 at 12:34am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awesome update.
    June 17th, 2008 at 09:15pm
  • Lightning Zap

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    That was an awesome chapter.
    Yay! They're in bed together.
    I know, they're not having sex, but still, Frank+ Gerard+bed= my mind working in overdrive :XD
    Can't wait to read more :D
    June 17th, 2008 at 04:50am
  • death_pixie

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    Great update. Frank and Gerard are so cute but Frank is still quite weird although you can tell he likes Gerard because he wouldn't be tense otherwise.

    Poor Quinn though getting sick and all.

    And you know what I think about you're writing style so I don't really ahve to tell you.

    More soon when you can please!!
    June 16th, 2008 at 05:28pm
  • Alexithymia.

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    I'm really liking the storyline that you have with this. That there is so much to there past, and just exactly what they mean to eaach other.

    And I have no complaint's about the way that you write. I love it.

    I am really interested to see where you take this.

    And I love the way you write you characters; they seem a lot more mature and grounded.
    June 16th, 2008 at 03:55pm
  • Apolaustic

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    oh i like this too
    June 15th, 2008 at 08:11am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Lightning Zap:
    :o Quinn and Frank acted really weird in this... I can't wait to see why :D
    I love this story :) It's great. Update whenever you can :D
    What Lightning said.
    June 14th, 2008 at 08:00pm