January 6th, 2016 at 12:38am
This was a beautiful take on the prompt given to us and I absolutely adored what you did with it. I love the depth Lani has and how the Captain treats her. While everyone else does view her as nothing more than an experiment, he sees her as a human which is amazing.
The only thing I would've liked is more description and perhaps more information on Lani herself. I do hope you continue this because I want to see what more could potentially happen.
Well done!
I did feel like the ending was a little abrupt, but I think that's mostly because I wanted to read more about Lani. You should at some point continue this or make a sequel or something because I'd love to see more of this.