Unravel - Comments

she totally passed out at work.. that was kinda funny

aawe Bucky (James) had been in her room to leave her a new phone, I do hope that he'll turn up to keep her company for a little bit, even if he didn't seem too happy about pepperoni

well okay, so first off, they got Steve to come and get Bucky and she got back to work- which is still totally shady..
and then she got that text but forgot about it because of Ewan, which in turn made her go home find the poor little fella..
and that made Hawkeye show up at the clinic.. can't wait to see where she'll go from there

Ya know, Clint was such a small character- kinda- he had his moments in the first Avengers movie- though I think he was better in Age of Ultron- that's when I started to really like him

Poor Vito This is intense, can't wait for more.

Happy birthday! Though I'm a few days late. My brother's was yesterday.

Yay for low-key fluff!!

omg happy birthday! turning 20 this year too anyway, I'm really liking this so far, keep it up

Happy Birthday!!

aawe he carried her to bed when she fell asleep! that's so cute
poor thing, he just wants to remember..

Think it's so cute how Vito totally keeps as close to James as he's allowed.. And that he came out with the note in hand, with the little unsure sence about it all, was so sweet

Hah, is she going to get him to use the chopsticks(?) or give him a fork?? if he's never had it before, just imagine him trying to eat with those.....
(he could totally let her teach him )

I'm picturing Bucky sitting on Liz's couch eating Chineese food with this look on his face. For such a short chapter, this is lovely.

He wants to be called James!

And he remembers! Some things.

Love the update!

hahah Bucky is a sneaky little ninja Find it totally funny that after a week he asked about her name, and that she totally hadn't thought of telling him before- just assuming that he knew..

N'aaawe!! He wanna be called James and he remembers stuff..

Interest proposition! I can't wait to see where it goes.

I'm wondering who it is setting her up. Could it be Ewan?

I don't know, but I love this chapter!

She had been prepared for several things today, maybe even for Barnes to steal her leftovers from yesterday’s chinese takeout, but hardly this. Oh I just find it hilarious that he's taken to the habit of stealing her food

gah, I wanna know who it is that's trying to set her up.. if it's the boss himself or someone she calls her friend..? maybe even someone else completely... but still..

ooh, she kicked that guys butt

and she's got a deal to make? with Bucky?? I hope so!!

The Winter Soldier, Bucky Barnes... And food theif. Love it!

hahah that last bit made me chuckle..
bucky breaking into her apartment and eating her food, and then simply declares that NO he wont stop doing it.. found that oddly adorable

I love this! :3

Something is definitely sketchy about the people she works with.

And I love Vito! I think he likes Bucky, to be honest. Whenever Bucky showed up at her apartment, Vito seemed to be at ease. Almost happy.

I trust a dog's instincts more than my own. I have a German Shepherd, two year old baby boy named Gunner, and when he's unsettled by someone, I'm unsettled too.

I think if Vito, given that he's a shepherd, and they're very protective, felt that Bucky was a true threat to Liz, he would attack.

And way to end that last chapter on such an angsty note. Hot damn, I can't wait for more!

Also, I love the fact that you've used the name Ewan. I really love that.

Keep up the beautiful writing!

hmmm was it really marc though that told the ''boss''??
kinda have this feeling that it might be evan, he's after all the one closest to her, and would notice what she's up to.. so wouldn't really surprise me if it's him

haha, vito.. either he's really scared of Bucky, or he likes him
he can do magic- pooff! and he's gone
so she's slowly starting to believe him, though knowing that there might be hydra at her work... that might just make her twitchy going back

i just love that she's so annoyed at all of the ''heroes'' and bucky and even though she kind of knows what he's been through she's like; well that doesn't give him the right to go out there and murder close to 50 ppl
can't wait to see if he shows up, and what'll happen then..

I think you are doing a great job. :)