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  • ethereally

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    Wow. Easily one of those most gripping first chapters/prologues I've read on here in a while. Of course, I'm a huge sucker for anything dealing with wolves, so I may be a little biased but still. I know from your other stories that you're an excellent writer, so I'm sure this story will be nothing less. As always, your layout is gorgeous. It gives off a certain aesthetic and really helped me get a clear image in my mind for this story (and that's super important to me). I'm just so excited for this and can't wait to see where you take it!
    January 19th, 2016 at 10:15pm
  • saegusa.

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    this is just a summary + prologue and i'm already in absolute love. In Love your details are amazing, first of all. with just a little taste of this story, you've set us up for something good. i've got a thousand questions: who hurt her? could surrendering herself to this darkness signify DEATH AND HORRIBLE THINGS? maybe the end of this person's life is what jumpstarts everything, maybe it's not who i think it is, maybe it is and i'm reaching. i don't know and i love it because it guarantees that i'm coming back for more. and allow me to fawn over your details again, just for a bit, because wow.

    and your layout, of course, is downright gorgeous. it's beautiful.

    i'm so very excited for this. it's going to be amazing.
    January 18th, 2016 at 11:28pm
  • A S K I N G .

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    Okay, so this is like one prologue, not even a whole chapter but as you can probably tell ITS SO GREAT! I have re read it like 10 times and hope that this continues because I can tell it can turn into something that is just amazing! You may not have many words written at the moment but there is something in those words that just is so. . . IT JUST GIVES ME SO MANY FEELS OKAY? SO PLS CONTINUE PLSSSSS
    January 18th, 2016 at 06:40pm
  • She Said Poptarts

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    that prologue dooooe
    Woo! I loved it! Now I'm curious as to what happened, did she get attacked? was she human? or was she already a were?
    January 18th, 2016 at 04:13pm
  • diet soda society

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    Amazing prologue! I can't wait to see where this goes, please update soon! :)
    January 18th, 2016 at 05:02am
  • She Said Poptarts

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    WEREWOLF STORY, YES!! AND YOU USED A NATIVE AMERICAN! Hail
    I'm so stoked, I'm definitely subscribing! (also the layout is bomb af)
    January 17th, 2016 at 07:57pm
  • raja sahara

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    this layout OMGYES

    but this sounds bomb af I can't wait
    January 17th, 2016 at 06:35pm
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